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Thorns Of Love - 5/20/2005 8:40:57 PM

ErtcWickdWanda

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Alas , The time has come.
The sweet pain I have grown to love and loath in the same line...
It was from the first moment that I knew she was mine.
Time stood still, " Yes hoplessly romantic one might say,
but the truth is the truth, and from this I will not sway.
Her eye's shined as if they we're Emerald stones,
and skin like ivory, with red striped rows.
Her smell, a delight, of sweat and tears.
I had found my way to open her un-bridaled fears.
Through the delight o' dawns breaking day, I showed her my mark,
and she then turned away,presenting herself for me to see.
Yes, she has come along remarkadbly.
So tender, and freash like springs first rain, dabbed with the lovely hand of pain.
Yes she is mine, and mine alone,
and on her rear I tattooed it with rose thorns. "

ww: mistresswanda

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RE: Thorns Of Love - 5/23/2005 6:11:06 AM

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Wonderful i know that feeling only his teeth this time have left a clear imprint on my behind! Thanks for sharing!

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RE: Thorns Of Love - 5/26/2005 4:44:14 PM

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This is a nice well thought out poem. I'll be keeping an eye out for more.

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RE: Thorns Of Love - 6/30/2005 4:24:00 PM

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With humble thanks. I do appretiate all that was said, and I would be honored to share more... You will be seeing more...

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