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lepus -> Erotic Haiku (5/28/2005 1:33:38 PM)

I did some of these for a laugh some time back, a couple of them are ok.
Thought they might serve as some manner of introduction here:-



filthy depressing bitch
sets my cock on fire
and then pisses on it




too close to touch you
each heartbeat takes forever
I could die waiting




i'm your postman
i fill your box
love letters in dirty envelopes




stef -> RE: Erotic Haiku (5/28/2005 2:09:07 PM)

None of those are haiku. It could be argued that they're senryu, but certainkly not haiku.

~stef



lepus -> RE: Erotic Haiku (5/28/2005 2:16:01 PM)

ok pedant, care to enlighten us as to why?



stef -> RE: Erotic Haiku (5/28/2005 7:21:00 PM)

Not particularly. Perhaps if you ask nicely next time.

~stef



theroebabe -> RE: Erotic Haiku (6/1/2005 6:25:57 PM)


Thanks for sharing!



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