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Rage's Poetry - 6/3/2005 5:43:26 PM   
Rageblade


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disclaimer-I'm not really this crazy...I think.


Force and Fear
My flesh it craves that wanton hunger
watching that innocence torn asunder
nothing more, yet something less
taken with that lust, so fresh
something so old, always new
overtaking me, consuming you

Your screams of fear
getting me high, changing my name
my face, dont deny my place
I see the truth behind helpless eyes
theres the passion that never lies

Taken with this frightful need
who's to blame for nature's seed?
If feelings and hearts divine all law
then where does love fit in at all?
If nothing more than a mockery
a passion unfit for all to see
rape exists on every balance
from sweet lies, to special talents

While I see the force of hand
to be the most beautiful of the band
what better display of truth in life
or even pain, love, and strife
and yet all of rape that I have shown
only this societies "justice" is known


Bloodlust

The Beat of my heart
a low droning pound
urging the awakening
of that empowering sound

That hate, my blood, the heat
all following that resounding beat
The dark whispers in my ear
Darkened plots know no fear

I hear the voice, my desire
The ever burning, consuming fire
The delightful rage burns in my eyes
and it wont stop until satisfied

Broken bones and torn flesh
ripped apart without regret
all with the lingering whisper
murder, murder, a distilled whimper
By my blood to this I am tied
Until my hate has finally died

Monster Within

Theres something inside me
something churning with need
it hungers for your flesh
it wants to make you bleed

It will consume every part
of your body and soul
It will steal your breath
and still make you whole

I keep it caged inside
this terrible thing
that wants you tear you apart
again and again

This despicable want
this burning desire
to let out the monster
and quench the fire

Each moment I see you
the monster grows stronger
Dark thoughts are rising
I can take this no longer

You better run away
you better watch your back
Because once your alone
I'll unleash my attack

I'll make you mine
in passion and pain
and without regret
leave my stain

You should have been careful
you should have thought twice
before bringing my lust
and the monster behind my eyes
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RE: Rage's Poetry - 6/3/2005 6:35:49 PM   
fastlane


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very well written and very revealing..kudos!

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RE: Rage's Poetry - 6/5/2005 7:58:38 AM   
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Very well written, and i thinl it may be a part of you that you dont let out . . . very often, i know Master is like that. Only his Monster comes out very often.



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RE: Rage's Poetry - 6/11/2005 6:30:47 PM   
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You should have been careful
you should have thought twice
before bringing my lust
and the monster behind my eyes


Nice! And I have experienced this in real-life! I loved this paragraph!

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RE: Rage's Poetry - 6/20/2005 3:53:19 PM   
Rageblade


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Thanks for the encouragement, Its been awhile since ive been able to write because ive been having problems with my internet, but I will see if I can post more ASAP

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RE: Rage's Poetry - 6/20/2005 6:34:52 PM   
sinnocentky


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thanks for sharing these. they are raw.. and exposing. yummm!

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