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ORIGINAL: NorthernMistress

I am a Domme writing this story from the sub perspective.  This is how I wish to make my sub feel.

--I have been waiting for so long to meet her.  As per her instructions I am naked, blindfolded with my hands cuffed behind my back.  I am kneeling with my back towards the door, anxiously awaiting for her to arrive.  My heart beats heavy with anticipation. If my hands weren't cuffed behind me I would have to hold my chest so it wouldn't escape.
The deadbolt on the hotel door is in the locked position so she can open it without the cardkey.  This makes me nervouse because anyone can peak in at any time.
I suddenly hear the door open and she walks in the room.  Oh boy, do I hope it's her and not hotel staff.  I hear her put a bag on the floor.  That must be her bag of goodies.
She walks up behind me and runs her fingers through my short blonde hair ever so gently scratching my scalp with her long nails.  I have been told this is my inspection.  I await more.  She runs her soft hands down my neck and over my shoulders.  Down one arm and up the next.  She scratches my back as her hands make their way down to my ass.  She cups my cheeks and then rubs the back of my thighs, down my calves and tickles the bottoms of feet with the tips of her fingers.  She walks around me and places her hands on the bottom of my thighs caressing her way up to my hips.  She just teases me by whispering her way past my penis.  She spreads her fingers wide and rubs my abs and chest.  My beating heart is pounding so heavy, it seems as thought it wants to jump out of my chest so it can be touched too.  She holds my face and I wait to hear her voice.  She says "Hello my pet", her voice penetrates my soul. 
She tells me the safe words.  "Red" for stop, "pink" for slow down and her favorite, "mercy" for I love it but you have given more than I can take.  She wishes to bring me to say mercy. 
She kneels me over the bed so my beating can begin.  She starts with her hand.  Very light spanks, rubbing and caressing in between.  She even softly kisses my ass cheek after the hardest hit with her hand.  I hear the zipper on her bag open.  I feel the leather of the whip as she drags it across my back.  Again she starts with soft blows.  Always stopping to rub my sore and aching cheeks.  Slowly the blows get stronger and stronger.  My ass is on fire but I cannot say mercy because the pleasure of her palm rubbing the pain away is addictive.  She even licks the pain away with her warm tongue.  She has told me in our many chats that she loves to hear begging.  I want to impress her with my pain limits so I start to beg knowing that this will increase the strength of her blows.  As I imagine, the pain is near unbearable.  The more I beg the hotter she gets and in return the hotter the feel of fire on my now tender ass.  The last blow is all I can take and scream out "MERCY MISS".  She puts the whip down and holds my hot ass in her soft hands.  She lets me catch my breath before moving on.  As I regain my composure she tells me that future scenes may include gagging but this time she wants to hear my sexy french accent. 
She helps me to stand and now wants to test my strength.  I work out regularly at the gym and am very well built.  She starts to wrap me in saran wrap starting at my shoulders.  I wonder how saran wrap will be stronger than my muscular arms.  She wraps me very tight.  I love the constricting feeling.  I think of it as her holding me very tight, protecting her new property from the outside world.  She wraps me from my shoulders to the tips of my fingers and still down a little more.  My hard penis pressed against my body, held in tight by the saran wrap.  When she is finished she tells me to escape.  I think this should be easy with my strength.  I try to move but to my surprise I am unable to even squirm my way out.  She really does know best.  I am humbled that my 5' 2" owner will always be stronger than me.
She helps me to lie down on the bed.  She cuts a slit for my cock to escape.  She also cuts holes for my nipples to peak out.  She starts licking my nipples and stroking my cock.  She wants me to beg for her to make me cum.  I beg like I have never begged before.  But she won't let me just yet.  She slides her pantyhose down her legs and lifts up her skirt and lowers herself.  I beg for her to sit on my face so I can bring her pleasure.  Her pleasure will always come before mine.  She lowers herself and I lick and suck.  I love her taste.  She grinds in rythym to my licking, her moaning is like music in my ears.  The more she moans the happier I am knowing that I may be worthy of her.  I can feel her body clench and have one final release.  I hope I have done good.
She sucks on my hard cock while I beg for her to let me cum.  She gives me permission and almost immediately I explode. 
We catch our breath and she cuts the saran wrap off.  She kneels me on the floor in front of her.  She is sitting on the bed.  She tells me she will never leave me while I am in sub space, she makes me feel safe with her.  We talk for a long time, things that I cannot write about.  Things that should be kept between a Mistress and her sub.  
I am still blindfolder and ask her if I can see her now.  She holds my face the same way as when she was inspecting me.  She presses her lips against mine and kisses me so passionately.  While I kiss her with my eyes closed she unties the blindfold.  When our kiss stops I open my eyes and see the most beautiful Goddess I have ever seen. 
After our evening, our converstation and our kiss, I know I will be hers forever.  She tells me I will be her houseboy, sex slave, pet and toy.  
I have found my owner.  Wait, I should say she has found me.--

Please be gentle in your comments, I have never written a story outside of high school.  This is the first time I have wanted to lay pen to paper or should I say fingers to keyboard.

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ORIGINAL: SimplyMichael

Noah,

You have really become bitter.

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  Male fantasies that are honestly presented have been welcomed as have male submissives asking for help. Where it isn't welcome is when it is presented by a guy thinly disguised as a woman or in some other clearly deceitful way.

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ORIGINAL: ExSteelAgain

Well, there are wanker spankers so it may not be bad for all. Michael talks about Noah being jaded, but I'm just happy Noah didn't take his red marking pen to the post, start underlining things and putting comments in the margins.