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Barbara -> subsumed (6/14/2005 7:53:50 AM)

Greetings. It's been awhile since I posted.
I think I finally got my creative juices flowing again for which I am most grateful.
If I can't write or draw I don't feel 'whole' because I need that outlet so much in my life.

I wanted to share this here -

subsumed
she quietly exploded
unconcerned
her mind sinking in a sea
splatters
enthralled
undergoing detail
memories
so lucid

suffocated
she quietly detonated
unnoticed
her heart sinking to the floor
splatters
encrusted
undergoing detail
evisceration
so meticulous


Barbie




theroebabe -> RE: subsumed (6/16/2005 1:11:03 PM)


Hi Barbie thanks for sharing! Glad to see your creative juices flowing!





suberic101 -> RE: subsumed (6/16/2005 9:51:44 PM)

Wow...




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