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RE: poem for a sub - 7/25/2007 7:08:21 PM

slaveluci

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ORIGINAL: NefertariReborn
Ta dah!!!!!!!!!!
No sooner said than done....wonderful to be so predictable isn't it?

Wow. That's all....just wow

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And I sent him some suggestions on the other side. Would you like a copy?

No thanks.

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Just because everyone else is doing it doesn't make it right...one of the things they teach in philosophy, fallacies

Really? I always thought as long as all my friends were doing it, it was A-OK. Color me corrected

.....lol......luci

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RE: poem for a sub - 7/25/2007 7:17:49 PM

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RE: poem for a sub - 7/25/2007 7:18:09 PM

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((grumbles about not getting the latest revised addition of the sub/slave handbook.. stomps away arms crossed))

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RE: poem for a sub - 7/25/2007 7:39:34 PM

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There are many - How about Shakespeares...

Shall I wait upon the time and hours of your affection?

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RE: poem for a sub - 7/25/2007 10:43:13 PM

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No thread de-railing
Else there be a flailing
If a ‘sir’ says we must rhyme
No sub would waste time
Luci you must compose
That which is not prose
a dom has spoken
And now his sub’s upset
Because his thread is broken
But how can that be?
Her posts are not poetry.
I hope that you can see
I agree with you, luci.

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RE: poem for a sub - 7/25/2007 10:51:51 PM

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Only submissives get to quote poetry?

I tie rope - slowly
White coil embraces limbs
Damn, she sleeps again.

E.

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"When you wake up, Pooh," said Piglet, "what's the first thing you say?"
"What's for breakfast? What do you say, Piglet?"
"I say, I wonder what's going to happen exciting today?"
Pooh nodded thoughtfully.
"It's the same thing," he said.

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RE: poem for a sub - 7/25/2007 10:56:31 PM

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I knew a Dom named Bates
Who played with swords and skates
but a fall on his cutlass
rendered him nutless
and virtually useless on dates.

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"When you wake up, Pooh," said Piglet, "what's the first thing you say?"
"What's for breakfast? What do you say, Piglet?"
"I say, I wonder what's going to happen exciting today?"
Pooh nodded thoughtfully.
"It's the same thing," he said.

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RE: poem for a sub - 7/25/2007 11:04:24 PM

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ORIGINAL: windchymes

If you don't like what you see
Here in dear old Collar Me
Here's a tip for what to do
Yahoo Groups is just for you

Make your own site, make it fast
You can have your way at last
If they say what you don't like
You can make them take a hike

I'm not lying, it's legit
There's the door, don't let it hit
A perfect world awaits you there
Good luck, godspeed, if you dare

......Now THAT'S a poem I can appreciate.........lol..........luci

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RE: poem for a sub - 7/25/2007 11:04:45 PM

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The dom intones;
Thwack, crack,
Paddle-whack
Give the sub a ……….groan?

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RE: poem for a sub - 7/25/2007 11:06:31 PM

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ORIGINAL: catize

No thread de-railing
Else there be a flailing
If a ‘sir’ says we must rhyme
No sub would waste time
Luci you must compose
That which is not prose
a dom has spoken
And now his sub’s upset
Because his thread is broken
But how can that be?
Her posts are not poetry.
I hope that you can see
I agree with you, luci.

Thank you, catize. You and Wyndchimes are poets of the first order. I can't believe the "off the cuff" rhymes you gals came up with....Bravo! luci

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RE: poem for a sub - 7/25/2007 11:07:48 PM

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ORIGINAL: Emperor1956
I knew a Dom named Bates
Who played with swords and skates
but a fall on his cutlass
rendered him nutless
and virtually useless on dates.

.....And who says Doms aren't brilliant poets themselves? Thanks for the laugh, Emperor.........luci

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RE: poem for a sub - 7/25/2007 11:14:41 PM

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A practitioner of shibari and Kendo
Is straight up -- no innuendo.
He doesn't enjoy
A live girl, or live boy
He'd rather flog Mario on Nintendo.

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"When you wake up, Pooh," said Piglet, "what's the first thing you say?"
"What's for breakfast? What do you say, Piglet?"
"I say, I wonder what's going to happen exciting today?"
Pooh nodded thoughtfully.
"It's the same thing," he said.

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RE: poem for a sub - 7/25/2007 11:34:32 PM

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I wish i was a little grub with whiskers on my tummy,

Thank you Salacioussquiz (and Master) for the positive contribution, I could definately beat out time to (and on ) this one. (Especially if you did have said whiskers !)

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RE: poem for a sub - 7/25/2007 11:46:36 PM

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ORIGINAL: Emperor1956
I knew a Dom named Bates
Who played with swords and skates
but a fall on his cutlass
rendered him nutless
and virtually useless on dates.

Oh what a sad fate
For poor Master Bates.
(I couldn't stop myself, I really really tried!)

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RE: poem for a sub - 7/26/2007 6:51:21 AM

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There once was a Dom from Nantucket ,He took a cane out of a bucket.

He had a submissive over his knee, He'd tied her hands to a tree.

He beat her light, her beat her hard, when she thought he was done, he still had a wild card.

In the end he exposed her pussy bare, and he had a hell of a hot time time whacking her there.

LOL well... best I can do before coffee

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RE: poem for a sub - 7/26/2007 6:58:43 AM

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Quoting poetry while getting the tar whipped out of you could be an interesting discipline exercise, lol. We've never actually tried that... BUT.. one time, my husband insisted on having " Staying Alive" playing in the background during a beating.

All I can say is that it's really REALLY hard to stay still with disco playing, not to mention keeping from laughing out loud.

"What?? You think the BeeGees FUNNY??"

WHACK!

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RE: poem for a sub - 7/26/2007 3:21:44 PM

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One more, for you dear. A variation on an old favorite:

Pity my poor subbie, Alice
She used a dynamite stick for a phallus.
We found her vagina
In South Carolina,
And most of the rest outside Dallas.

E.

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"When you wake up, Pooh," said Piglet, "what's the first thing you say?"
"What's for breakfast? What do you say, Piglet?"
"I say, I wonder what's going to happen exciting today?"
Pooh nodded thoughtfully.
"It's the same thing," he said.

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RE: poem for a sub - 7/26/2007 3:47:33 PM

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((cant stop giggleing)) Emperer you are toooo funnny!!

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RE: poem for a sub - 7/26/2007 3:49:20 PM

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Doesn't Barney do poems? That'd be great punishment.

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RE: poem for a sub - 9/9/2007 8:34:32 AM

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It's that look you give. The look that says,"I love how you use me,let me serve you." Like the change from Pacifist to Warrior,this is both a shift and an extension,and again,I don't have the training and toolsto match who I have become. I see one woman among others,equally young, equally nubile.My eyes lock on the broad strap of her purse,confining, defining breasts,pressing, tugging, spreading them.When I walk quickly and turnto watch her approach,I knowI want my woman to want to be bound. A revelation that should not surprise, but does. When a former love suggested Captain/Stowaway play,I searched for three days to find the perfect ship,One week more to find the perfect restraints.When she said "No, not Captain/Slave"just a fantasy game,my thrill sank. I called myself Lover, not Captain. I kept the clothes and restraints. I will be Captain,master of she who wants to serve me. It is who I am. Sept 4, 2007

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