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MasterFireMaam -> RE: I need a Mistress to help me with my profile please (7/27/2007 9:11:37 AM)
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1) Post a picture. A nice face shot that shows a pleasant expression. Or, state at the beginning that you have one like I described to share.
2) It's too long. I read the first sentence or two, then you started in about your childhood. Take all that out and put it in a journal entry.
3) Clean up your sentence structure, gammar and spelling.
4) Explain what you have to offer a relationship. I don't need to know that you're overweight but still play soccer. I want to know if you can clean, be my companion and are interested in doing the little mudane things. Also, do you have a job? In other words, show that you think about this relationship in a realistic way.
5) Put your fetishes last, if you feel you need to list them.
6) Overall, the profile is rambling and has not real structure. Take one thought and collect all the other similar statements and create a paragraph.
Master Fire
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