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pixelslave -> RE: I changed my profile, I hope it is much better now :) (7/28/2007 10:35:05 AM)
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aSlavesJourney,
I didn't see your initial profile, so can't say how "improved" the new one is over the previous one. I will say however, that you failed to follow an important part of the previous advice given: use a grammar/spellchecker before you post it. There's a huge difference between "no" and "know". Ditto for the difference between "their" and "there". I was a bit put-off by your numbering of the things you had to say, rather than making your thoughts into sentences that flowed together into coherent paragraphs, which for me, would be easier to read. [8|]
I also wondered how someone who is new to the lifestyle could be so "committed" to certain things and only looking for people who are "serious". Instead, I'd think you'd be looking for someone who could help you further explore the extent of your interests in the lifestyle and introduce you to the many aspects of it. To me, that would seem to be a more realistic expectation. Recognize that these are just a few of my thoughts and others will have their own. Feel free to take a look at my profile which has been complimented numerous times in the past as an example of what some Mistresses here would like to see (I'm positive that others would disagree), when I was still looking to meet someone; which is why it's still there in it's original form along with the additional notice added to the top that I'm now collared to Majik and no longer seeking a Mistress. [&:]
Hope you find this feedback useful. [:D]
- pixel
Collared to Majik
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