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Offerings - 6/30/2005 8:20:35 AM

dechala

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This was just something that i was thinking of.It's not great but it will do

And yes i did have someone in mind when i wrote it

Offerings

i may not be young anymore,i'm not 21

but with age comes wisdom and life experience

i offer this to you

i may not have the body of a goddess

but i work hard for the body i do have

and i receive compliments for my perserverance

i offer this to you

i may not be the most intelligant person on the planet

but i have vast knowledge about a few things

and i long to share it with the world

i offer this to you

i will make mistakes,

but i am honest,one of the most honest you will find

and i'm not too proud to admit when i'm wrong

i offer this to you

i may not always be the perfect submissive/slave

but i will give You all of me,lovingly

i will live to please and to make you happy

i will give you my body,my heart,my soul..

i offer this to you

i am human

i offer all of this to you

my gift.

dechala

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RE: Offerings - 6/30/2005 8:31:40 AM

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very simple and straightforward which is nice, and the feelings within show a definate heartfelt promise. I think whoever your Dom/Domme is, is very lucky.
This shows a strong spirit and conviction and loyalty and devotion that few sub/slaves ever really get to understand.

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RE: Offerings - 6/30/2005 8:38:04 AM

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Thank you

Sadly i'm without a Dom at the moment. but i had someone in mind when i wrote it.
Just something that i churned out on a rainy night

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RE: Offerings - 6/30/2005 9:04:22 AM

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Sorry to hear that, you sound like a good sub.
Hope you get who you wree thinking about though.
Any other writings you've done?

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RE: Offerings - 6/30/2005 9:06:32 AM

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ORIGINAL: Kalteth

Sorry to hear that, you sound like a good sub.
Hope you get who you wree thinking about though.
Any other writings you've done?

Thank you

Its not really a matter of me getting whom i wrote that for.Its just someone that was and still is very special to me
i've done some poetry and stories.
Most of them are dark.Perhaps if i ever get up the courage i'll post some here one day

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RE: Offerings - 7/21/2005 7:33:06 PM

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Dechala,

very well said and true for me. I know i offer him all that i am, the good and the bad, the pretty and the not so pretty, the happy and the sad and hope that he knows i do all i can to make him proud and happy of me and to make our life together awesome because thats how and who he is to me.

kind of feels like an army ad be all that you can be lolol

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