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Abstract Poetry - 7/9/2005 8:20:08 AM   
JstoneWsh


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Motion

how do you dance in the wind of delight
dropping from afar a mist,
a soft touch of cotton, cloud;
singing in pain, its heavenly light.

opening your hands, a cast set free
fly, fly, fly,
the movements of earth, fear;
return to thee, return to thee.

dancing and swaying eternal night
the world within grasp,
its concrete stone, metal;
crumbles with might.

running and laughing with playing to be;
these are the moments,
that shall come to be, life;
its spiraling dance so heavenly.

whispers, whispers, whispers
sleep in peace, the peace given;
let go, obey, release; water;
its an eternal longing, whisperer

how do you dance in the wind of delight
often does it go in a direction,
a turn to the right, lost, darkness;
its smile is found in the eye of light.


just one wish
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RE: Abstract Poetry - 7/10/2005 3:34:27 PM   
flirt


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Excellent verse, i do love poetry all kinds and this was indeed poetry. Enjoyed it.

flirt aka enigma

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RE: Abstract Poetry - 7/11/2005 8:02:59 PM   
JstoneWsh


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thank you, you speak kind words

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