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Vancouver_cinful -> RE: Where to begin (7/12/2005 1:32:47 PM)
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First of all, I think you need to go back and correct the spelling and grammar. Profiles really are your first impression online - like clean teeth and hair they will attract people to you.
Although many people think it's nonsense, good spelling and grammar reflects care and intelligence. It may be that it's difficult for you, and if that's the case, then maybe you can have a friend help you edit it.
I think you've done a fairly good job of being yourself in your profile. You may want to expand it a bit, perhaps mention how long you and your countess have been together.
Welcome to collarme.
Cin
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