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Please Lend Me a Hand........A poem about a sub - 7/15/2005 5:09:04 AM

Caringhands

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Sometimes things build up and you need a hand to get a release, and this is my version of a release spanking.

The Rage glowed like a golden ball
Tear everything to pieces and rip them up small
Clench fists and screw eyes tight shut
Paste over the wound and ignore the cut

Feet struggling to grip, sliding in sand
Help me please just lend me a hand,
Nothing, so build it higher and wider, hold it all in
Just add another layer and make it a thicker skin.

Let me laugh but please let me cry, oh God this isn’t me
The sunny face, not the mess inside I don’t want you to see,
Help me please, just lend me a hand
I can see in your eyes that you understand.

Do what you can, or please, just do what you must
With no malice or thoughts unkind I give you my trust,
Please break down these walls and end this strife
Please break down these walls and give me back my life

My brain is on fire so intense is the pain
Eyes blur, oh God, again and again and again
My eyes are so wet I can’t even see
It’s cracking, it’s breaking, jeeeessssuuuus! I’m free.

I’m broken, I’m dying, it’s all falling out
There’s nothing left I’m empty nothing to doubt
You’re a pal, you’re a friend, I know it cost you dear heart
But thank you, oh thank you, for doing your part.

Your arms are tight round me please don’t let me go
Don’t let me return yet to the world that I know
I’m floating so gently so gently at peace
Thank you my friend for that glorious release