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HollyBlue -> Guilty Pleasures (9/15/2007 2:24:34 PM)
This forum includes "Sharing Your Experience," and I just wrote this poem about my experience. Potential critics: please go easy on me. I'm no aspiring professional poet, just a lifelong submissive masochist with emotions clamouring for expression. *********************************************************************************** Guilty Pleasures** Wicked thoughts crept in like nimble spiders Through the cracks between my conscience and my sex Spinning webs of forbidden pleasure Too extended to avoid, too sticky to escape I wanted the unspeakable So I claimed it quietly In dark, secret places The cage in my mind flung open Letting deranged, savage desires cavort in stolen freedom Cartwheeling from brain to cunt Setting off devastating orgasms on their way Shhh...mustn't let my parents hear...mustn't let my roommates hear... Mustn't let my husband hear... Quiet as a mouse, for years, and years, and years. Quick! Hide the candle, the broom handle Clear the history and cache Shove these evil thoughts back into their dark prison Intercept the credit card bill, when it comes... Falling to my knees, head bowed Not to worship a loving Master But to beg forgiveness from a God so demanding he could never be pleased Lies flung from my heart into outer space Echoing back at me, hollow and accusatory Repentance impossible Because it was bound to happen again And again And again Shhh, little girl Don't cry Set your passions free This is who you are Carnal and intemperate Neither sinner nor saint Scream, slut, at the top of your lungs You insatiable conduit for extremes of pleasure and pain Let it all slam through you And out into the blinding light of day This is who you are This is what you were born to be Nothing to hide Rest in your Master's arms Sleep safely in your golden chains Sinless and satisfied Forever at peace

grlneedstolearn -> RE: Guilty Pleasures (9/15/2007 4:34:02 PM)
Well done

possessedone -> RE: Guilty Pleasures (9/15/2007 6:52:21 PM)
absolutely in awe of your ability to express yourself

ThinkingKitten -> RE: Guilty Pleasures (9/15/2007 7:01:38 PM)
Paint, write, throw darts at a board, bungee jump, whatever it takes to help you get your emotions out, do it. Far better than bottling them up. Writing has saved my life, so if you find it works for you, then go for it. Looks like you're off to a good start - I like what you wrote. Good thing about the written word to, is that you can always go back to what you wrote long after the fact, and if you put it down correctly, you can put yourself right back into that headspace - but from a safe distance. If you do it cryptically too, then no matter who falls over it and reads it, they can never be sure what it is you were writing about........... but YOU know.

HollyBlue -> RE: Guilty Pleasures (9/15/2007 11:54:26 PM)
quote: ORIGINAL: grlneedstolearn Well done Thank you!

HollyBlue -> RE: Guilty Pleasures (9/15/2007 11:55:44 PM)
quote: ORIGINAL: possessedone absolutely in awe of your ability to express yourself And thank you!

HollyBlue -> RE: Guilty Pleasures (9/15/2007 11:57:45 PM)
quote: ORIGINAL: ThinkingKitten Paint, write, throw darts at a board, bungee jump, whatever it takes to help you get your emotions out, do it. Far better than bottling them up. Writing has saved my life, so if you find it works for you, then go for it. Looks like you're off to a good start - I like what you wrote. Good thing about the written word to, is that you can always go back to what you wrote long after the fact, and if you put it down correctly, you can put yourself right back into that headspace - but from a safe distance. If you do it cryptically too, then no matter who falls over it and reads it, they can never be sure what it is you were writing about........... but YOU know. All good points. Thanks! [;)]

Babybass -> RE: Guilty Pleasures (9/16/2007 3:06:50 AM)
Wow - that is amazingly good! I love it!!

HollyBlue -> RE: Guilty Pleasures (9/16/2007 3:48:03 PM)
quote: ORIGINAL: Babybass Wow - that is amazingly good! I love it!! Thank you!

pleasureforck -> RE: Guilty Pleasures (9/17/2007 11:52:56 AM)
That is so great! You may not be a professional poet but you come close. [:)]

behindmirrors -> RE: Guilty Pleasures (9/17/2007 12:07:27 PM)
I enjoyed it- and good for you to express your feelings through writing! It feels good, doesn't it? I do that all the time. smiles behindmirrors.

mmb1 -> RE: Guilty Pleasures (9/17/2007 12:21:56 PM)
yes, expression is good :)

AEslaveM -> RE: Guilty Pleasures (9/17/2007 9:41:16 PM)
Wow! Sounds like you speak for a lot of us...........Thank you.

HollyBlue -> RE: Guilty Pleasures (9/17/2007 11:28:31 PM)
Thanks so much, everyone, for your support and feedback.

taintedgypsy -> RE: Guilty Pleasures (9/24/2007 9:26:15 AM)
Hey I am up there with the rest of them espression is good and writting is great ... I really enjoyed it ... thankyou for posting it.

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