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Greywolf66 -> The Meeting Part VI rev. b: (7/26/2005 8:04:22 PM)

Due to the following comments, we revised the ended of the story. We would never want to make someone seem nicer then they are. Besides, we don’t like nice.

”Far nicer than I'd ever be”
~R



The Meeting Part VI rev. b:

He’s laying on the floor between Raven and tana’s feet and it’s cold and hard. He’s happy for the blanket he’s wrapped in, as well as the small pillow his head is resting on. He is even happier about the fact that there is no slack in his chain. It is some time early morning; they had been at it that long. Tana was eating her breakfast and taking her vitamins, while Raven munched on some fruit salad. He just listened to them as they talked about everything that happened during the night, about how this or that might have been done differently; about what a slut he was. They made sure to remind him of each instance. Raven would give his leash a little jerk to make him look up, “Do you realize how much cum you drank tonight, slut?” He turns bright red and tries to hide in his pillow, “Yes Ma’am.” A little later Raven jerked his leash again, showing him her arm and marking a point on it, “You had this much in you, slut…and you still wanted more.” He blushes bright red again and responds, “Yes Ma’am”, before trying to hide again. Tana would make sure to bring up all the humiliating instances she could think of and add in her two cents when Raven would tease him about it. This didn’t go on for too long, just long enough for tana to finish her pills; but it seemed like forever to him.

They slide back their chairs and he felt Raven tug on his leash, “Come on, slut…time for bed…leave your stuff there…you won’t be needing it.” He begins standing up, but before he gets too far, Raven gives a quick jerk and points to the ground. Raven begins making her way out of the kitchen and he crawls behind her. Tana makes quick work of the items still out and catches up to them as they reach the stairs. Raven leads them past the bedroom that they were using, toward The Room. Once he realizes where they are headed, he stops short. He looks up at Raven horrified. Raven looks down at him and laughs, “You didn’t think you were sleeping in there with us, did you?” She pulls firmly on the leash and he has no choice but to follow. Raven guides him up onto the Bed, positioning him on his back. Tana helps Raven cuff and lock his arms down then tighten straps across his chest and waist. Tana pulls his collar tight and locks it down to one side, while Raven puts the penis gag back into his mouth, “We wouldn’t want you to keep us awake, slut.” To his surprise, they start putting his ankles up in slings and tying his thighs open. He starts pleading into the gag, and receives a sharp slap across the thigh for his trouble. They drop the bottom of the bed out suddenly, leaving his ass hanging off the end. Raven stands above him and drags her nails down his chest, leaving angry red marks. “Since you’ve been such a good slut, I think we will let you sleep with the small dildo this time….Would you like that?” He nods that he would; not wanting to risk the alternative. She looks over to tana who is already moving the fucking machine into position. He starts whimpering when he realizes what they have in store for him. Raven purrs as she moves towards tana; kissing her deeply then saying, “He does whimper so nicely”. Raven lubes his ass and the dildo up well before sliding it into his ass and locking the Machine down. She then turns the Machine on, steadily increasing the speed to just above half. Raven then takes tana and moves around to his side, while he moans heavily into the gag. He looks up to see them kissing deeply. They each reach down and take one of his nipples, digging their nails in hard. His muffled screams turn them on all the more and cause them to twist harder. They keep this up until the lust in their eyes says they won’t be getting to sleep anytime soon. A blanket is carelessly tossed over him and the Machine turned down to a slow grind. They leave him without a backward glance.

The End.




LionessInBoots -> RE: The Meeting Part VI rev. b: (7/28/2005 6:19:46 AM)

wow!!! very descriptive writing. love the flow. amazing work Grey look forward to reading more.. keep writing. take care >^;^<The Lioness




Greywolf66 -> RE: The Meeting Part VI rev. b: (7/29/2005 7:44:49 AM)

Glad that you liked it, I don't write often so I'm glad you enjoyed it. I will probably start work on another story in the not so distant future.




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