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Becoming - 7/26/2005 11:29:39 PM   
MsTempestRaven


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To be a vampire is a simple thing, When they bite you all you feel is a tiny sting, You become powerful and in control, But you may keep or lose your soul, You have stealth, and luck and blood, You could be a vampire but you could still be good, At least that’s what they told me, And I said yes, wanting to be one of them to be free, But the bite caused me serious pain, And what I became made me hang my head in shame, To be a vampire is not fun, or romantic, It’s awful and evil, just to be pedantic, Your soul stays with you, begging for remorse, But the bloodlust drives you like some invisible force, I stalk those who don’t suspect, And slaughter those who don’t expect, I walk in the darkness, I never show my face, I hate myself, killing my one time own human race, But I cannot help myself you see, You cannot, you can never help me, Because I hide myself from your sight, A true ugly grotesque creature of the night





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And out of the darkness, the Zombie did call
True pain and suffering he brought to them all
Away ran the children to hide in their beds,
for fear that the devil would chop off their heads.
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RE: Becoming - 7/29/2005 10:50:03 PM   
Rubyb


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Bravo!

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Author and fan of erotic vampire fiction.
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Ruby's portfolio at writing.com:
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RE: Becoming - 7/30/2005 12:54:54 PM   
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Very well put.... definately takes a bit away from the romanticism of the vampire.

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Into the night sky I fly through distant lands and darkened streets... Up into the clouds to play and dance with the moon.....To the hearts of all and I say to you be true to they own heart.

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