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Behind My Smile - 7/26/2005 11:30:49 PM

MsTempestRaven

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I’m in a prison I can’t escape, Battling my own nightmares, And it’s pretty clear to me, That no-one even cares, I’m sat in the darkness, In the corner of my mind, And all I can think of is, There is no reality to find, I’ve reached my breaking point, And my head is in my hands, My lank hair touching the floor, No life in the copper strands, All I hear are my own words, My own visions of hell, I know that my soul is leaving my body, Leaving this empty shell, I’m alone and no one knows, But through the years, all the while, I am still trapped, Trapped behind my smile

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And out of the darkness, the Zombie did call
True pain and suffering he brought to them all
Away ran the children to hide in their beds,
for fear that the devil would chop off their heads.

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RE: Behind My Smile - 7/29/2005 10:48:47 PM

Rubyb

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Wonderful. So dark and deep. The picture is an excellent choice to match the mood.

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Ruby Bloodstone
Author and fan of erotic vampire fiction.
Lifemate and pet to T, Nathaniel's Miss

Ruby's portfolio at writing.com:
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