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Forever - 7/30/2005 3:32:40 PM

MsTempestRaven

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This girl’s best friend is her knife,
She doesn’t like the company of others,
She’s rather listen to the words of blood,
Than to the advice of her mother,
Her friend is always there for her,
It helps her through the hard times,
It keeps all of her deadly secrets,
And turns blind eyes to her crimes,
But her friend is also violent,
Her friend’s words cut her deep,
Each syllable slices through her skin,
And keeps her from her sleep,
When her own species cast her out,
Her friend always offers support,
When everyone is giving her the cold shoulder,
The knife offers lonely comfort,
The razor edge will break the arm,
Slit and cut and slice and slash,
Blood flows forth as a red river,
Deeper and deeper she can’t look back,
This girl’s only friend is her knife,
Even though she’s pretty clever,
But this girl lies down to weep at night,
Because she knows friendship lasts forever

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And out of the darkness, the Zombie did call
True pain and suffering he brought to them all
Away ran the children to hide in their beds,
for fear that the devil would chop off their heads.

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RE: Forever - 8/1/2005 6:34:24 AM

LionessInBoots

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the knife may feel like your only friend
but the pain of your hurt will come again
the knife only releases you a lil while
the pain and fear is trapped inside
it may feel like a good way to ease the pain.
just remember its only a brief refrain
you cant hide from whats inside of you
you have to stop cutting and face the truth
only than will you be set free when you face reality
the knife cant hold you like your mother can
it cant listen and squeeze your hand
it cant be a shoulder to lean upon .
it cant dry away your tears. it
it only causes pain
so put down the knife and look arround
life is too short to continue hurting yourself
Im sure you have people that care about you
that are real and want to help you through
dont be ashamed to ask for help
W/we all make mistakes we wish we could erase
so put down the knife and walk away
the scars you are making will last your whole life
the pain that your feeling time will heal away
but the scars will be there to remind you
cutting is not the way to face your pain
so start today and start living your life
by facing the pain and throwing away the knife
if you need to talk I will be here for you.
I hope My words will ring true to you

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RE: Forever - 8/14/2005 6:33:49 AM

Bluff

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They wont ring through!
because you dont see!
fire is reality!
how can a sheep understand a wolve?
a wolve can understand the wolve!
the eye wants to see!
the eye of the tiger!
your advice is to close them!
some want to go to the core!
you try prevent them!
so it wont ring through!
it wont!
and friendship lasts forever!

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İn the web of the spider,
waiting for her to come.

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