Bluff
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Ok i touch it!
thats your last post here that i read!
i read it again and again and want to make corrections!
my english is much worse than yours!
but i always say they have the car and i have the talent!
but you have both!
so let me touch it and judge me as i do judge you!
this is not judgement!
not judgement!
what is it?
to touch a masterpiece?
with tyro hands?
a shame?
i shampooed them dont me blame!
well lets go!
ah and each sentence will get a note of effectivity strength.
It’s just an addiction, 10
Like sugar and caffeine, 10
It’s more colourful than coffee, 10
And healthier than nicotine, 7 And healthier (as?)nicotine
It’s focused around the self, 6 and focused around the self
No one else is involved, 7 No one else involved
No one is dragged into sickness, 9 No one being dragged into sickness,
Each time the addiction evolves, 9 Each thime this addiction evolves.
There’s no passive smoking, 10
And no drunken brawls, 10
Just endless adrenaline rushes, 8 Just endless andrenaline rush,
Inside your own home’s walls, 6 inside your walls of home!
There are no side effects of accidental overdose, 9
There are no cases that ruin your insides, 8 no cases that ruin your insides,
There is no disillusionment afterwards, 8 no disillusionment afterwards,
And no drunken accidents when cars collide, 10
There are no mornings where you wake up, 8And no mornings where you wake up,
And wonder where you’ve been, 10
There is only that one split second, 10
When you feel you’re in a dream, 10
There isn’t a caffeine high, 10
Or a pulse from Saccharin, 8 Or any pulse from Saccharin.
There’s only the point when you realise, 9 theres only the point that you realize,
You can’t stop after you begin, 9 you cant stop after the begin!
There is no hyper-activeness, 10
No shortness of breath, 9 and shortness of breath
In fact for just one moment, 10
You reach out and touch death, 9You reach out and touch the death.
There is no advert on the television, 9 no adverts on television,
That tells you that it’s wrong, 9That tells you that their wrong,
You never have to hear about it, 10
Except perhaps hidden in a rock song, 10 except perhaps hidden in (that?)rock song.
There are no unused smoking patches, 10
And no wrappers from chocolate bars, 10
There is no empty bottle of vodka nearby, 8 and no empty bottle of vodka nearby,
And no tiny injection scar, 8 Also no tiny injection scar,
But there are the scars all across your skin, 6 they are all across your skin!
And the emptiness in your eyes, 9 And the (Void?) in your eyes,
You can’t seem to tell the truth anymore, 9
You open your mouth and out come the lies, 7 you open your mouth your breath is the lie!
You try to tell yourself that you can stop, 5 telling yourself that you can stop!
You know that it’s not true, 9 you know that,s not true
The longer you put it off, 10
The more the need shines through, 10
Self Mutilation has taken you over, 10
There’s nothing that will halt its reign, 10
That inexplicable urge, 10
To bring yourself pain, 10
You can’t talk to your friends, 9
They just won’t understand, 10
That you reached out for addiction, 10
And grasped it in both hands 8 And grasped it in both hand!
< Message edited by Bluff -- 8/13/2005 12:39:37 PM >
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