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Profile guidance - 10/20/2007 1:08:20 PM

slaveOFdarkness

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Hello,

As a submissive that finds himself becoming a true slave i have humbly come here seeking a Domina that desires such. As i created my profile i spoke of what is in my heart and would humbly ask for the guidance of the Mistress's here to tell me what You feel i should include and/or exclude. i've posted what i wrote for the profile below for Your convience, thank You so much for Your time.

Respectfully,

slave

There is a darkness deep within my soul it lives in the core of who i am.

Once it was a faint whisper, a whisper that called itself submission. Now the whisper has become a strong, powerful voice - it is demanding and oppresive and unyeilding - and it excites me - fulfills me. it tells me i am a slave and that i belong in the darkness, in the cage, humiliated, degraged, cuckolded; enslaved.

For so long i have resisted the voice - fought it because i knew to truly feed my soul would invite a life of real and total enslavement. The voice knew this so it watched and waited laughing at me from the
shadows knowing that the longer i resited the sweeter my subjugation into eternal night.

i tried to control the voice - to feed it only a little of the darkness at a time. But instead of controling the hunger in my soul i now yearn to be controlled - i yearn for the Domina that will cast me into the darkness and mold my mind, my heart and my soul to keep me in the darkness as Her slave, Her creature for all eternity.

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RE: Profile guidance - 10/20/2007 1:10:45 PM

AAkasha

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Do you have any hobbies?

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RE: Profile guidance - 10/20/2007 1:17:08 PM

cloudboy

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You should try and hookup with guidinglite. Your handles allign well.

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RE: Profile guidance - 10/20/2007 1:19:32 PM

SunNMoon

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What do you like to do for fun?

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RE: Profile guidance - 10/20/2007 2:12:26 PM

stockingluvr54

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maybe you might talk like a normal guy instead of all the "heady" fancy bullshit talk...???? jmo.........

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RE: Profile guidance - 10/20/2007 5:30:44 PM

TNstepsout

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It's very poetic and well written, but it doesn't say much about who you are or what you are looking for. I would rewrite the profile as more of a standard profile and use what you wrote here as a journal entry. That would give people reading your profile the sense that you tend to be romantic, lofty and poetic in your thoughts and perceptions, but that you can relate on a more concrete level when necessary.

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RE: Profile guidance - 10/24/2007 9:35:43 PM

spinntja

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I would have to agree with the ladies, SoD. I skimmed your profile the way I normally skim profiles (who has time to read them all?). What I remember at the end is:

"blah blah... darkness, cage, humiliation, degraged (deranged? degraded?), cuckolded; enslaved... blah blah blah newbie newbie newbie typos wordy newbie blah blah."

So, my 10-second scan suggests that you have zero experience and some fairly standard, poorly defined fantasies. Also that you are likely to be high maintenance and need a whole lot of gentle care, which you will probably resent. To judge by the writing, you probably have no more than a B.A., unless you are in something technical, which means you'd be of limited use to me in a public setting. To add to that, you include nothing about me or about the wonderful things you might do for me.

In short, you offer to allow me to help you discover and fulfill your fantasies on my time. What's appealing about that?

For an example of one I might want to look twice at, see veroniqueEsclave. She knows what she wants and what she does not. Gives me something to go on. Very nice. Had she been local, I might even have dropped her a line.

Good luck, happy hunting! -SJ

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RE: Profile guidance - 10/25/2007 4:31:41 AM

MamaDomme

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Even on the list of likes, dislikes, etc., you mention nothing about other interests other than sexual activities.

Who are you and what do you enjoy? You have given absolutely nothing for us to go on. You have a profile that I wouldn't be tempted with. Sorry.

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RE: Profile guidance - 10/25/2007 10:41:42 AM

MiladyElaine

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quote:

i belong in the darkness, in the cage, humiliated, degraged, cuckolded; enslaved.

quote:

ORIGINAL: slaveOFdarkness

By telling Us where you belong, you are saying what you want done to you.

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RE: Profile guidance - 10/25/2007 6:35:58 PM

RosesHaveThorns

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So what kind of person are you? Unless you are a whisper in the darkness, this doesn't say much.

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RE: Profile guidance - 10/25/2007 7:36:18 PM

GoddessDustyGold

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If I browsed profiles (I don't), I would pass it right by. And if you sent Me a letter of introduction along these lines I would also dismiss you as a hopeless romantic as far as this lifestyle is concerned. It also sounds like you have already decided that you need to be caged, degraded, cuckolded etc. Frankly that is all for you. Not much there for Me! It is okay for occasional scenes, etc...but who is going to give Me a massage, draw My bath, serve My dinner and do the dishes?
It is very romantic and pretty, but it doesn't tell Me anything about how you would do with Me day to day. I agree with TN...move this poetry to your profile and present yourself in a more prosaic manner on your profile.

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RE: Profile guidance - 10/27/2007 5:10:54 AM

MisPandora

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That's something for a journal, not your profile.

Tell us who you are: meat and potatoes. Save the fluff for a blog, or a personal letter to someone you've connected with. While I might go, "Hmmm, that's nice," I'd pass on by without another thought.

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