Kana -> RE: HOW'S MY PROFILE? (10/31/2007 9:25:31 PM)
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First off, I think its a great idea to hit a forum and ask for feedback, it says something positive about you and your willingness to be open-minded. Secondly the fact that you listen and adopt the suggested changes also says good things. Lastly, from my perspective the profile is good, a bit of a challenging tone but hey, you're a Dom, thats OK. If it were mine I would take a look at the hyperbole. Sometimes being understated can do more than being bombastic. As an example I would mention your use of extremely twice in two lines. If the woman is smart, she doesn't need to read that, she already knows shes intelligent. Just my two cents worth. Welcome, and good luck.
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