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Ladybug19 -> fear of the next step (7/2/2004 1:16:16 AM)
the anticipation mounts the uncertainty fills every part of my mind days my mind now counts and terror kills every shred of peace i find i will go to Them must take this flight though it may leave me homeless i now seek the gem that will set alight this Slave's life filled with stress Slave Dee

proudsub -> RE: fear of the next step (7/2/2004 3:58:59 PM)
I like your poems Ladybug. But with this one i'm having some trouble with the message. If i am understanding it right the slave is leaving home and flying off to start a new life with a dom/domme. I can understand some apprehension, but she sounds terrified.

Ladybug19 -> RE: fear of the next step (7/2/2004 8:15:23 PM)
well i was when i wrote it lol and i had good reason as it was yet again another scam sigh it happens but honestly the ending of the poem also states that the search is terrifying but worth the search for the right one i was very terrified at the time though and it came out that way Slave Dee

Ladybug19 -> RE: fear of the next step (7/2/2004 8:17:22 PM)
and thank you very much glad someone likes them i thought i was just taking up space lol Slave Dee

dearydear -> RE: fear of the next step (7/7/2004 5:36:57 PM)
it sounds like you really where afraid glad your still safe with us but it really needs work hun [:D]

Ladybug19 -> RE: fear of the next step (7/7/2004 6:44:02 PM)
yet again thank you for the critisism Deary Slave Dee

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