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dixiedumpling -> i am a fish (7/2/2004 12:00:43 PM)

i am a fish swimming in the sub waters. The Doms fish from boats anchored here and there. Some Doms are very choosy, catching first one and then another and finding them lacking, they toss them back into the cool water. Some Doms are not choosy at all. They fish day and night hoping for a bite. When They get a bite, They get excited and try to reel the sub in too quickly. The sub, at first excited by the attention, gets worried and then frightened by the sharp pull on the line and begins to struggle and fight. The Dom sometimes realizes His mistake and lets out the line, uses soothing words to gentle the frantic sub fish. The fish relaxes with the freedom of the slack line only to be drawn slowly and carefully into the boat.




iwillserveu -> RE: i am a fish (7/2/2004 12:59:54 PM)

Good metaphor, but I don't like the idea if I'm successful I die. Maybe something where the subs don't asphyxiate to please the Domina. (Of course, Note Mr. lazyasswillserveu doesn’t help you.[:)])




MistressDREAD -> RE: i am a fish (7/2/2004 2:30:26 PM)

hahaha wow now I like that metaphor
talk about the altimate end to a lil fishie.
I can see My belly full allready ~smiles~




dixiedumpling -> RE: i am a fish (7/2/2004 2:35:51 PM)

Geez Louise, iwillserveu, i didn't mean the sub had to die! Just that her/his life will be changed.




MistressDREAD -> RE: i am a fish (7/2/2004 2:43:59 PM)

dangg
but if I dident
know better Id
swear iwill is
thinkin more
like Me every
day!!




Ladybug19 -> RE: i am a fish (7/4/2004 7:44:23 PM)

pretty cool (i don't mind getting eaten *grins evilly* ) hehehhehehe
Slave Dee




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