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Disintegration - 8/9/2005 2:54:26 AM   
NakedOnMyChain


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Joined: 11/29/2004
From: Indiana
Status: offline 		Hey all, hope you enjoy. I just wrote this about five minutes ago. I have medicine-head from some Tylenol pretty bad, so let me know if it's just crap or not.
~Michelle

Disintegration

He noticed me.
He split my soul with every glance,
every word,
every heartache of need that hits my brain.

He took me in
From pouring rain,
From unknown slef,
From a life mundane in city streets.

He gave me pleasure pain
and painful pleasure.
With the smallest gesture,
words unsaid

He took me over
and I was not I
but part of Him.
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RE: Disintegration - 8/9/2005 2:55:44 AM   
NakedOnMyChain


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Joined: 11/29/2004
From: Indiana
Status: offline 		Self. Not slef. Geez. I warned you all about the medicine-head thing.

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RE: Disintegration - 8/13/2005 10:57:50 PM   
trejeremy


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Joined: 3/16/2005
Status: offline 		besides the slef I thought it was good. Not bad for medicine head.

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