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BDSM Haiku - 12/21/2007 6:51:57 PM

tavinia

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Recently i have been engaged in a "game" of haiku, and thought it would be fun to see what the deliciously wicked CM minds could create. A haiku is a Japanese poem, typically about nature or everyday life, composed of seventeen syllables arranged in three lines: 5 syllables in line 1, 7 in line 2, and 5 in line 3. Below is my contribution to get things started; please let me know what Y/you think of my haiku, and post Y/your own if so inclined.

Kneeling before Him.
Wide, innocent eyes darken,
Daddy belt me please.

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RE: BDSM Haiku - 12/21/2007 9:07:21 PM

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Bend over my sweet bitch
Twin globes raised high in the air
Doubled leather crash down hard

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RE: BDSM Haiku - 12/21/2007 10:49:44 PM

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Well Tavinia lass I liked the theme of yours so well I continued with it.

Strong arms, comfy lap
Fingers wander where they will
Daddy smiles warmly

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RE: BDSM Haiku - 12/21/2007 11:53:29 PM

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flying leather strikes skin
moaning subbie sheds a tear
Mistress coils her whip

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RE: BDSM Haiku - 12/22/2007 12:15:22 AM

MadameDahlia

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I shall call this masterpiece Ode to the Sucking Slave. Enjoy.

Blowjob fantasy
My glorious cocksucker
My sweet little sperm bank

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RE: BDSM Haiku - 12/27/2007 12:48:09 PM

Taboo4Two

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leathery serpent
coiled tight ready to strike
the whip in my hand

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