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RCdc -> RE: ... being spiritual more or less you understand true D/s and its passions... (1/4/2008 12:53:51 PM)

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ORIGINAL: mancaringlove

This True Masculinestance whispers...


... in this romantic dinner the main course is.... of us.... one... sweet company....

... in this romantic dinner the main course is ... of you  in your sweet surrender how I ...

Which one do you like better? Both?


Neither.  The concept is ok, the ending of both work - but the beginning is ... empty and not particularly romantic.  If that makes any sense.

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Well, the rest you may get later,  in whispers? Or is it too much fantasy? Why?


Everything can be fantasy.  So can nothing.  All depends on the people involved.  Again, I do not like the 'dinner' analagy.  But then, someone else might.

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We can set goals to accomplish anything we want.... but somehow the romantic expression, with the labor of love, the caring love and it's passion... is impossible for most?  Impossible why? Who saids? Man, Woman, society? Rules?



Some people are jaded.  And some people don't like to think too much. And some people decide love isn't something they need.   Doesn't make their relationships lesser or more, just different.  Who says?  It's all down to the individuals involved.
For us, we love, including each other.  But what we love is not governed by anyone else other than Darcy.  But then, we are blessed and fortuante not to be restricted.
 
the.dark.




mancaringlove -> RE: ... being spiritual more or less you understand true D/s and its passions... (1/4/2008 12:54:12 PM)

Some, including myself do use alliteration or assonance rhyme etc.

I don't intend to be copied at this time...  I stay mostly mystical in public and my form is shown to that special female.  Enlightened one,

What is the form of mystical? Perhaps you could show some...




mancaringlove -> RE: ... being spiritual more or less you understand true D/s and its passions... (1/4/2008 1:00:34 PM)

What I wrote was meant to be complete.  Thanks for your opinon!!




Prinsexx -> RE: ... being spiritual more or less you understand true D/s and its passions... (1/4/2008 1:11:46 PM)

Please try
www.poetry.net/

I think you might find those who understand





Jeffff -> RE: ... being spiritual more or less you understand true D/s and its passions... (1/4/2008 1:22:20 PM)

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ORIGINAL: mancaringlove

Some, including myself do use alliteration or assonance rhyme etc.

I don't intend to be copied at this time...  I stay mostly mystical in public and my form is shown to that special female.  Enlightened one,

What is the form of mystical? Perhaps you could show some...


there is so much to say to this..............and yet the statement speaks so clearly  on its own

Jeff




mancaringlove -> RE: ... being spiritual more or less you understand true D/s and its passions... (1/7/2008 11:21:20 AM)

that was:
What I wrote was not meant to be complete.....




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ORIGINAL: mancaringlove

What I wrote was meant to be complete.  Thanks for your opinon!!




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