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ORIGINAL: mancaringlove This True Masculinestance whispers... ... in this romantic dinner the main course is.... of us.... one... sweet company.... ... in this romantic dinner the main course is ... of you in your sweet surrender how I ... Which one do you like better? Both? Neither. The concept is ok, the ending of both work - but the beginning is ... empty and not particularly romantic. If that makes any sense. quote:
Well, the rest you may get later, in whispers? Or is it too much fantasy? Why? Everything can be fantasy. So can nothing. All depends on the people involved. Again, I do not like the 'dinner' analagy. But then, someone else might. quote:
We can set goals to accomplish anything we want.... but somehow the romantic expression, with the labor of love, the caring love and it's passion... is impossible for most? Impossible why? Who saids? Man, Woman, society? Rules? Some people are jaded. And some people don't like to think too much. And some people decide love isn't something they need. Doesn't make their relationships lesser or more, just different. Who says? It's all down to the individuals involved. For us, we love, including each other. But what we love is not governed by anyone else other than Darcy. But then, we are blessed and fortuante not to be restricted. the.dark.
< Message edited by Darcyandthedark -- 1/4/2008 12:54:16 PM >
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RC&dc love isnt gazing into each others eyes - it's looking forward in the same direction
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