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I See You - 8/21/2005 3:30:34 PM   
pangaia


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each word and whisper thrown thru the thin veil of this screen.. this page.. this doubt that seperates the reader from the writer.. between lover and loved.. between thought and deed..

i take a deep breath and whisper to the fingers of the air around u to carry with them the light sting of these words.. i see the warm hands of my minds eye stretch out to caress ur cheek.. u close ur eyes and stop questioning and analyzing these thoughts that might be poetic but are no poem..

we are talking you and i.. lover or other.. these words dripping fresh and alive from my heart.. flowing thru the new consciousness as the conversation of two whales two thousand miles away.. voices carried thru the wavess to reach the target.. the sound of pure thought.. intense and pure..

oh i wish u would ask me for more words that i might flood u with their warmth.. but as long as i make sure everytday that the is always a lover for the loved.. a sender for whatever message my words bring.. then i can relax and be at peace..

and so each day i study the sleepers words to describe my waking dream..
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