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liketophoto -> Anyone else have a poem or story? (1/21/2008 5:59:29 AM)
Adorationby LTP bottom for the Top, expression of obedience, respect, submission, devotion, caring,affirmation of warmth on a cool silk pillowworshiping with my tonguecaressing your fleshin pale moonlightone thought aloneto please

sweetqadesh -> RE: Anyone else have a poem or story? (1/21/2008 6:19:49 AM)
Submission is....by unknown author Submission is not about suffering, it is about serviceSubmission is not about humiliation, it is about humilitySumbmission is not about pain, it is about being presentSubmission is not about being used, it is about being of useSubmission is not about control, it is about letting goSubmission is not about your desires, it is about giving to othersSubmission is not about abuse, it is about acceptanceSubmission is not about proving anything, it is about being realSubmission is not about being content, it is about respectSubmission is not about how you look, it is about how you careSubmission is not about denying yourself, it is about being openSubmission is not about punishment, it is about disciplineSubmission is not about being able to escape, it is about being committedSubmission is not about fear, it is about trustSubmission is not about sex, it is about loveSubmission is not about pleasure, it is about happiness

venusinblu -> RE: Anyone else have a poem or story? (1/21/2008 6:22:22 AM)
there once was a dom called rick who had an enormous dick instead of a flogger he'd use his todger and make all the other doms sick ...

RCdc -> RE: Anyone else have a poem or story? (1/21/2008 6:25:22 AM)
[sm=biggrin.gif] the.dark.

RCdc -> RE: Anyone else have a poem or story? (1/21/2008 6:28:03 AM)
Yeah well. I kind of find it quite disrespectful to Asher to steal his idea...HERE and multiposting, the mods don't particularly like hey. the.dark.

RCdc -> RE: Anyone else have a poem or story? (1/21/2008 6:33:06 AM)
Hi sweet q - and welcome to CM. Don't take this the wrong way - you will get used to me.[;)] I absolutely disagree that submission is about service. It really has nothing to do with it and is an entirely different thing hey. I would pretty much disagree with about 100% of that poem, depending on the individuals involved. the.dark.

liketophoto -> RE: Anyone else have a poem or story? (1/21/2008 6:35:30 AM)
Wow..... Get alife, this is about submission, not erotic stories. I put forrth my poem, no one elses.

RCdc -> RE: Anyone else have a poem or story? (1/21/2008 6:40:08 AM)
You may want to check TOS... and Asher posted a thread on stories or anything. Just like you have - hence your title. Poem or Story. I am pointing out there is already a similar thread. Take or leave it. But no need to get defensive unless you did something that needs defending.[;)] the.dark.

liketophoto -> RE: Anyone else have a poem or story? (1/21/2008 7:40:49 AM)
sweetqadesh, I enjoy this poem. It is important to express that submission is more than a narrow perception . Even if the narrow minded may not understand. Thank you!

RCdc -> RE: Anyone else have a poem or story? (1/21/2008 8:00:34 AM)
I find the poem narrowminded in itself. It's cool for the individual that wrote it, but it could be reversed for another person. You can read it as an individual piece its ok - but if you place it as 'this is what submission is and this is what it isn't' you are walking a very naive and narrowminded path. the.dark.

camille65 -> RE: Anyone else have a poem or story? (1/21/2008 8:27:16 AM)
One of the things I enjoy about others poetry or stories is that it is often such a personal glimpse of anothers way of thinking.To me there is nothing definitive about poetry, it is simply a way of personal expression. Very personal.[;)]

liketophoto -> RE: Anyone else have a poem or story? (1/22/2008 5:57:03 PM)
enters my Mindby LTP probes symmetricallythrusting into unknownlike roots into soildamp soillike my mindlike my bodylike my soulentering orifices of delight and painnow knowing allinner thoughtscopulated mindthe feeding begins

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