ThinkingKitten -> RE: Just One of My Latest Experiences (1/23/2008 7:47:50 PM)
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ORIGINAL: Bamslilgirl I don't know if this is how people normally treat other people on this site, but it's ridiculous. I posted this thread THINKING that someone here may want to read it. I guess I was just flat out mistaken. I wasn't sure what section to post it in, & as much as said so, as I'm NEW here. But someone even had a smartass comment about THAT!!! To all of those who think they're being funny, or have posted smartass & rude comments to this post, GROW UP!!!!!!!!! You're only being childish & out-right RUDE. After about a week on this site, I see that it may not be a place worth coming to. To those few who have been adult about things on the site, & have been friendly, thank you all for being so welcoming to me when I joined. The problem is... there are some excellent writers on this site, who occasionally post something they've written here - and it's interesting and different (check Aakasha, for one - I think it's her?). You need an awful lot of work to even come close to writing something that's more than the run-of-the-mill "I did this, he did that, I did this, he did that, we sucked/fucked/dripped/soaked blah blah blah". Find a good thesaurus and instead of giving the mundane physical descriptions, try inserting more of the actual emotion (if there actually is any, that is). Let us get inside your head more - that's way more interesting than factual stuff about what's being shoved up your pussy (IMO). And yes, paragraphs and variable sentence construction definitely help. Lesson learned hopefully - put it in your journal, or if you try again and want to ask for some constructive criticism.... we'll be waiting.
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