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a poem "pain marks the spot" (ok, three in o... - 9/3/2005 6:12:07 PM   
lordress


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Pain Marks The Spot
.
pay attention
and ignore me
you don't want to see
what i feel
.
you can't understand me
you know me so well
it's too much for me
and you don't dare try
.
it's not your fault
i found this place long before you
a private map
in my head...
pain marks the spot
.
leave me alone
help me
this is such a horrid place
yet, so quickly i rush to get here
a private map
drawn in blood...
pain marks the spot
.
acknowledge
overlooking me
it's ok
i don't mind
you don't have the map
how can i expect you to come along?
.
you don't even know where i'm going
(do you miss me?)...
pain marks the spot
.
doesn't matter...
i'm here
only i can find my way out
my map, remember?
pain marks the spot
.
go away!
your silence
deafens me
.
leave me to my darkness!
your light
blinds me
.
shut up!
your love
kills me
...if i could only get your hands to...
c'mon, pain marks the spot
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RE: a poem "pain marks the spot" (ok, three ... - 4/19/2010 8:33:14 AM   
Unlovedforever


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wow : (
beautifully sad.

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