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Valentine's Dav - 2/11/2008 11:43:21 AM

MasterTrader

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With Valentine's day coming up, just thought I'd share this prose with a dominant theme that I enjoy with all who like this sort of thing

It was but a glance, a fleeting moment in time, and then it was
gone.

Oh that I could hold this moment forever. Held captive
within eternity.

How could but a simple smile have such an
effect on my heart? With each flowing movement of her body
my soul does yearn, with each gentle brush of her lips I crave more.

My heart beats faster now, my mind races with the possibilities of love,
yet it is not just love, it is pure sexual desire, raw animalistic urges to take her.

The complexities of the heart confound me, bound within each lie love and rage
coexisting like the sun and the moon and we are mere spectators of their majestic struggle to dominate.

Naked she lies next to me, the smell of sex lingering in the air, our bodies spent and I begin to understand.
If but for a moment and then it’s gone!

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RE: Valentine's Dav - 2/11/2008 2:29:14 PM

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Very nice poem, and I love the imagery and contrasts. I wrote a poem last V-day for my now fiance. This was when he was my sub, and this poem was one of his gifts. He still reads it from time to time, even though we're more equals now than Mistress and sub.

"To my sub, whom I Love"

Surrender your soul
and give your body to me.
I gently blindfold you,
because I can't let you see.
What am I doing, you wonder.
The suspense leaves
your body tingling in anticipation
and I haven't even begun to tease.
I feel you arch up and moan
already wanting release,
showing me how much of a slut you are
silently begging to please.
I respond by tracing the rope
around your sensitive skin,
and tying you tightly
So we can finally begin.
Tracing my tongue along your skin
Now your body is mine,
flicking your nipples, and lightly biting
a taste to me that is devine.
The moaning I hear, that I've caused
excites me even more.
It causes my libido to rise,
and also yours, you little whore.
I stop for a second and watch
you squirm in your bonds
moving away and watching silently,
making you believe I am gone.
The cry I hear arouses me further
yet it also tears at my heart,
to hear how bad it is for you
when you think we are apart.
I talk to you soothingly
and begin to stroke that shaft of mine,
Until MY penis is raging hard
and I decide it's finally time.
Bound and helpless, you can only wait
as I tease and tantilize.
I know you want me, I see the need
brimming, like tears in your eyes.
Thrusting myself on top of your cock
and fucking you quickly, roughly,
then stopping altogether,
now slowly and softly.
Not too long, and you're begging
for me to let you come.
And I tell you to control yourself,
until I'm satisfied and done.
Holding back your own pleasure,
you almost scream my name
You shudder underneath me
because I finally came.
"Now" I scream, "for me my slut!"
And with no hesitation, you do
crying out, then orgasming.
Then weakly, breathlessly stating, "Mistress, I love you."

< Message edited by Faeorie -- 2/11/2008 2:30:25 PM >

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