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My first atemnt at a erotic fiction. Pleese read and tell me what you think. This is also my first completed story written in Englsih. Yes this is a werry strange fanfiction. The story is set to the Mage setting, World of Darkness, the Chantry Westbridge.
A Rival`s fall.
The rain was beating endlessy on the red tile roof of the huge, nobel looking mansion. Candels kept the old building lighted as the electrisity had been out for over an houer due to the raging storm. I stood wanting the form of Majorie Aleksander as it moved back and forth in her library. I both hated and lusted for this lush spanish butey. Majorie had come to the chantry over two years ago, and soon she had become the Deacon Primus favorite. Soft spoken yet wise she knew how to impress the elders. And I hated her for that. I Decon deserved that place among the deacon counsil that now had been offerd to Majorie. Whit envy i observed her form moving in the shadows of her labratory, and I begun to fantasise aboute what was under the rich velvet robes she wore. I imagined i did see the contures of a nippel under the rich fabric of her robe. And I felt my manhood stiffen at the atisipation of the vengance I had planned for this butiful mage. Ah ys, the insolent bitch might have stolen my position, but to night she would pay, and I would get both plessure and revenge in one. Offcourse the Traditions and the chantry leaders would punish me for this act, but looking at her form i imagined it be worth it. I smiled as i watched Majorie, an bolt of energy forming in my hands. The female mage continued her work, yet unawere of my presence, but not for much longer. I could not wait to hear her scream.
Whit the simple utterance of a fue words the ball of Energy flew from my hands, smashing into Majorie`s midsection, causing her to fall to her knees. Oh how I adored her like that. A pained look on her butiful features, fear in her eyes. And on her knees before me like the littel, deserving slut she was. My bliss was short lived, my spell was designed to knok Majorie out, but not harm her but obiously it was not strong enoh, for the female mage was getting to her feet, a look of anger on her butiful face. The next thing i know, bolts of fire fly by my face, just buring my face. I let out a curse and send out a second ball of energy. This one drawing a scream of pain from Majorie as it hit her, sending her to the ground. Quikly i grab for the forces of Vim and shield her from her magickal powers. Majorie sit there, looking at me, trying to regain some composture. Finaly she speaks.
"Decon, you deare brake into my sanctum and atack me. Roland wil have your hide for this. Relse me and leve this place now and leve me to my experiments, and I will forget I ever did see you here." I say nothing, I just walk over to her and hit her across the face one, hard. Majorie yell in sjock. "Silence bitch, I am sure Roland will have me punished, that just means I must let this eveing be worth it dont it. Now I will use your body, like if you was an object. I will rape you and hurt you, all for my plessure. But the amount of pain you suffer is up to you. You can submit to me and let me do this, and it be less than if you resist. But either way i will have you." I savour the look of horror and disbelif on Majorie`s face, she know she can not win this, I am a far stronger mage than she. Finaly in defat she nods. Her eyes full of anger. I smile a cruel smile. "Good now listen werry closely, for i do not like repeating myself. Tonight you are not Majorie, you are maggie slut, a mere sex toy, an object, and like the worthless slut you are you will not speak unless spoken to, and every sentence i hear from you will end whit Yes Master. Is that understood?" Majorie`s eyes shoot lighting at me, and whit a defiant voice she screams at me. "Want my body, then take it creap, but you will not steal away my dignety." Again i backand her hard. She turn her face back to me, a tricle of blood falling form her lips. She is defiant, she did not become an Adept at the Arts by being weak willed. She obiously needed to learn a lesson, a lesson aboute her proper place. I pull my slave for the night to her feet by her hair and force her up againt the wall. Whit a wave of my hand and some mutterd words, her hands get secures to the wall by invisabel chains. I can hear Majorie gasp. Then i graw a knife from my belt and slowly advance on her. She stand whit her back to me, and i first let the blade gently stroke her chin, drawing the merest hin of blood. I hear her gasp in fear and my member swell. Oh how i will enyoy to rape her body, and make her mine.
I then metodicly begin to cut the red velvet rode from Majories body, exposing her tan, sweet, feamle flesh. All the while i hear her paniced whimpers. Majorie is a butiful woman, standing a five food four tall and being a bit plump. Her spanish heridage evident. I smiled as i admired her ass cheeks, I would enyoy using that anul later. Finaly having gotten my captive naked, I stand admiering my work. Again I cast a spell. This time conjuring a long whit whit four long tails from my bedchamber to my hand. Sterly i talk to my slave. "For being disrepectful, ten lashes, for failing to call me Master, ten lashes, and for disobeying, twenty lashes, forty in all. Ready yourself maggie slut." maggie slut stand shivering, then the first stroke of the whip fall, and she cry out in pain. I smile, wathing the welt raise on her back. I hit again and again I am rewarded by that sweet cry. I can feel my penis bulging under my robes, aroused by her pain. Slowly medodicly I get into a steady rytem of strokes. The swishing sound of the whip. maggie slut`s whimpers and cryes, her sobs of pain, oh and the soft inpact of leather on flesh, it all exites me. I am careful, I dont want to damage her to much, and only some of the whipstrokes actualy brake maggie slut`s skin. By twnety lashes the proud Hermetic mage in front of me is redused to a whimpering mess, , she sobs, cryes and begs me to stop. But I have no mercy. This slut stole my postion, and now she pays. I feel it is to total right to abuse her like this. Take plessure in her pain.Thirty lashes. maggie slut is redused to pitiful sobs, hopeless whimpers, all she wish for is for the torture to end. and it trilles me that I have the power to do so, and then deny her. Finaly, the forthieth blow lands, an extra hard one, drawing a loadt horase scream from maggie slut. I wawe my hands and the magick bonds relse her. The female mage fall to her knees. I walk over to her and holds the whi to her lips and tells her to kiss the instrument of her torment. It is an indescibabel sight when maggie`s tearfilled, face whitout much hesitation fearfully follow my comand. I want for some seconds but when I hear nothing from her i backands her hard again, drawing new tears from my littel slave slut. "Are you not going to tank your Master for diseplinning you maggie slut? I ask her, Obey me or do you want more punsihment?" maggie do not hesitate. "Thank You Master." She wisper. pain an humiliation on her face. I brutaly grab her hear. "Thank me properly slut." I yell at her. The mage on the floor cringe and stutter out. "Thank You Master for diseplining me." Again I backands the worthless slave. "Toy are nothing maggie, a slave, an object,t here is not I for you, use the name you ahve been given. Noe thank me properly this time. Or your will have forty strokes more." Fearfully maggie begin to tank me, like a good slave. "maggie slut thanks her master for diseplining her, she need diseplin to be plesurabel to Master. Pleese let the wortless maggie slut plessure Master more." I smile at the total humiliation in maggie`s eyes I savor it. Oh this sniveling bitch was the one that had stolen my position from me, and now look at this deacon. A sniveling sex slave before her master. To make it worce i pet her head. "That is a good girl maggie slut, obey and there will be comfort mixed whit the pain." To my suprise the female mage bowed her head to my petting hand, seaming to relax a littel. Interesting I begun to think. But now there was time for my Penis to have some atention.
I drew the robe over my head and exposed my long, think penis. I was big and I smile when think how much it will hurt her when i force the pice of man meat up maggie slut`s littel slave ass. I stroke my penis several time then grab majories hair. I pull her towards the penis. She look disgused but dear not protest. "I am going to use all you holes littel maggie slut, I will tear myself into you pussy and anus, dos that prospect frighten you mymlittel slave?" I ask maggie. maggie avert her eyes and says. "Yes Master, it frigten maggie slut Master." I smile, pleased she rember to speak corectly. "But you realise it is my right to use you body and hurt you as i please right littel one?" I again ask the female mage on the floor. Maggie shiver whit anger but still avaerts her eyes and answer. "Yes Master. It is your right to use worthless maggie slut`s body and hurt her for you plessure Master." I yoyfully pet her head then forve her down on my penis. "Open you month maggie slut." I say and like a good slave she do so whitout protest. I forced my penis into the slave`\s month and watched her gag. I used her head and fucked her face, ignoring her fearfull moans and her gaggin. I did this for several minutes. Holding back my orgasem, wanting that for later. Finaly I let go of her face and Magge speaks, emidiatly, eager to pleese to avoid more pain. "maggie slut thanks her Master for alowing her to worship his butiful member Master." I smile and pet Maggies head,a nd to my suprise she raise her head slightly to meet my hand. "Now bend down and kiss my feet, lik my toes then stand and lett me see your breasts." I order. maggie slut emidiatly get down on all fores. Her warm thounge playing whit me toes. I feel a surge of plessure of ths show of dominance over her. And a new feeling emerge to. one of caring. I dont wish to let her get away from her suffering. But i start to care for here, like one might care for a pet. I watch my mage slave demean herself by liking me feet some time before i drag her to her feet by her hair and instrukt her to stand whit her hands behind her head. her breast jutting out.
I admire magge sluts fine breast for a while, slightly hanging, no model boobes, but still soft and lovely. I take one tippel in my moth and suck it, drawing a sigh of both humiliation and plessure from my slave. After a while to top and look maggie in the eyes, she averts them, frigtehn to look at me. I stroke her hair several time for comfort, and she finaly look into my eyes, tears still flowing form her lovely dark bown eyes. Again i mutter some wort and a shot flogger appear in my hand. maggie look frightend, but she dare not protest. "You will have ten strokes across you boobes. You are alowed to cry, but for every stroke you will say your slave thank you Master. Understood?" I ask her. maggie nods slowly and mutter a whimpering "Yes Master." Then i being the flogging. I get so turned on by her screams, and her sobs and her shivering voice that uther "Thank You Master." "T...Thank..you Master." After the tenth stroke have landed i hold the flogger out of maggie slut to kiss and she do so emidiatly, almost egarly, "*Sob* Thank you for giving worthless maggie slut a whipping Master. *Sob* *sob*" I draw maggie close and hold her comfortingly, feeling her body, wet whit swat and shivering whit pain and fear. "You did well slave. I am proud of you." I mutter. The mage slave sobs against my sholder for severl minutes before I show her away and demand she get down on the floor.
"On the floor and spread your legs slut!" I order and maggie emidiatly obeys, spreadding her legs wide, looking to please. I look at the dot of dark hair and smile. I quikly climb on to of her and feel her wetness againt my sex. She was getting on of this, and she was dripping. I reatch on and twist her sore nippes whitout any warning. "Who gave you permission to be horny slut?" I ask, twisting harder. maggie slut howl whit pain. "Master pleese forgive maggie slut, she will do better, pleese master, punish magge sliut so she can do better, pleese MASTER." maggie slut cried. I nod. "I will grant you that favor slut, you will be punished, once I have satified myself whit your body. maggie look up at me, almost happy. "Oh thank you Master. Thank you for punishing littel undeserving maggie slut Master." I smile and nods, then i start to consentrate on her pussy. Slowy i work my huge member inside her thight shaft, hering her wimper. Gredigly i start to kiss her, letting her moan against my month. I begun to move inside her. Trusting in and out, ignoring any pain i might give her. God the plessure, knowing i caused pain, and forcing this butiful mage to grovel before me and now using her like the wortless thing she was. I rarerd as i thursed into her. Continued whit it unthil i felt near a climax. Then whitout waring i pulled out, and tossed my captive around and rammed my while dick up her asshole. maggie let out a blood chiiling scream and continued screaming as i thurst like mad into her rectum. Blood flowed from her opening and maggie screamed for mercy. I took such plessure in her pain and thursed harder, to make her hurt more. Suddelry in all the screams of pain came a plea i had not expected from my captice. "M...ma...master...Pleese, maggie....slut...need to come....let....maggie...slut ...come....pleese....master....pleese...master." Maggie sobbed in her pain. I smiled and whisperd in her ear. "YOu have my premission maggie slut. come." And in a scream from both of us, wherei did not know where my scream becun and her ended we had a voilent orgasem. I pressed her body towards me by holding her hips, wating to hurt her, wating to show this wortless whore who was her master. And maggie screamed in pain and plessure mixed. Then we both colapsed, exosed. It was magick, pure magick that orgasem, and i could her my Avatar, and hers sing."
We lay there for some time, resting, then i whitdrew from her. maggie slu crawled like a dog over to me and thanked me. "Oh thank you master, maggie slut...oh the pain maggie slut felt....oh master maggie slut is so scared." I took her in my arms then, aware that i was falling in love. I theld her sobbing from to my chest, whispering cofrots, promising her the pain would soon end. maggie seam to be clamer by my words and i continued unthil the sobs had slowed to a weak sniffeling. "There there maggie slut, you did good....shush my love, it is almost over.....sush no more pain before i desire it...be calm now my love." Finaly whne she wal calmed I held her from me and look into her eyes. "You still need to be punished, but after that it will be over." maggie slut looks down. "And how will wortless magiie slut be punished if she may ask master?" I use one hand to dry tears from her eyes. "Tiy will resive five strokes of a singel tail whip on your back for being horny whitout leve, and fie for dearing to ask me to come, now a singel tail will hurt more. But I will be here my love, and you will be all rihgt. And when it is all over I will draw you a nice bath and then tuck you into bed." maggie started sobbing again, and i both felt exited and pitied her. But she knew what she was suposed to answer. "Yes Master, you worthless whore maggie slut thanks you Master." I smiles and helped her up. "Good girl" I whisper. I am aboute to sumon the magickl bonds to hold her in place when my slave make an request i would not ahve expected. Not a plea for mercy but rather she whisperd. "Pleese master forgive maggie slut for being so ruse as to ask for somthing, but can she be aloved to take the punishment unbound to show she can take pain and make her Master proud. If it is not to pretentious that wortless Maggie slut might belive Master might be made pround of her, Master." I look at her in suprise for one moment. Then i nod. "It might be pretentious, but iI might be proud of you my wortless slave. But if i am to grant you your wish, you must swar somthing." maggie nods and whsipers fearfully. "Whatever Master comands." I nods and says. "Repeat after me: I Majorie Odara, filia Hermatius of House Bonisagus, herby swar..." I told her the rest and i listend whit pride as i heard my new slave repeat my words. "I Majorie Odera, filia Hermatius of House Bonisagus, herby foreswar my freedom and my name, and acnowledges that i am a wortless slave slut whit no rights. i am maggie slut and this is the last time i will use the word i. maggie slut exist only to serve her Master. Decon Smith of House Tremere, in any way he neds. maggie slut knows that her moth and cunt and ass are her Masters to use, and so is her pain, for she is a worltess slave and deserve punishment and suffering, and she is a sex crawing whore." maggies cheeks blushed whit embarishment as she spoke her oath of slavery to me, and her eyes burned whit lust. Then as i needed the turned her back to me and held her hands over her head, waiting the kiss of my whip.
I sumond the whip whit a smiple Muto Vim spell and uncurled the singel tail, then i struk her, drawing screams of pain, and blood eatch time. I was so happy everytime i hear her scream of pain, as so paroud every time i see she did not move away, but stood there taking her punishment. After it was over he back was dripping blood. I held the blood coverd whip to her lips and watched her eagerly kiss and lick it, then she thanked me. "Oh Master thank you for the pain Master. maggie slut is sush and unwortly resipient of your atention Master, thank you, thank you for hurting her, My litel maggie slut`s pain pleese Master." Then she could say no more, for the pain and tramua was to grate and she colpsed, unconsuous in my arms.
I took maggie to my rooms and prepered a good bath whit calming, good smelling oils. Whit some simple Corpus spells i healed her inguries, not wanting permantet harm to befall my love. I placed her in the warm wather and washed blood and tears away from her. maggie sobbed, remembering pain and terror, and i comforeted her as best i could. When finish in the bath I lifted her up and dried her of and carried her to the bedrrom where i chained her hands together and added a long chin to the bedpole. Then i forced my penis into her anus, drawing a new scream from my slave. And for several houers i lay there, trying to comfort the traumatised mage, promising her to love her. And she showed her submission to me. Finaly she feel into an uneasy sleep, full of nightmares of pain, nightmares I hoped would disapear as she grew used to her new life. And after i while i to feel alseeep, my prik deeply inside the ass of my beloved slave, hurting her in her sleep. I made one trust just to hear a sore sob, and then fell into a blissfull sleep.
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