"Raining" (Full Version)

All Forums >> [Casual Banter] >> Creative Writings



Message


boiphil -> "Raining" (7/16/2004 8:35:31 AM)

it's raining..

today when i awoke

i heard it raining

outside my door

but this time

there is no hiss

i strain to listen

as the street

is used

over and over

again and again

unmerciful tires

creating

a multitude

of slapping

against earth's

very grain

i close my eyes

once again

acute

but today

there is

no hush

only the sounds

of slapping

of wetness

and i imagine

each drop

touching individually

yet falling together

in a type of unison

lashing against

a hard surface

repeatedly

making it pliant

surely the rain

is a master at molding

at slowly slapping

the hardest of surfaces

into total obedience

today when i awoke

i heard the rain

and i understood

all of the sounds

of it's refrain




Ladybug19 -> RE: "Raining" (7/16/2004 10:24:54 AM)

very nice i like that one
Slave Dee




Page: [1]

Valid CSS!




Collarchat.com © 2025
Terms of Service Privacy Policy Spam Policy
0.015625