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Smiley Story - 4/14/2008 7:08:50 PM

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RE: Smiley Story - 4/14/2008 7:31:12 PM

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Not much of a read but the plot is good. However I have a couple of questions.

Does her husband know she is a stripper ?

Did she find the condom under the carseat yet or is that being saved for the sequel ?

Did they ever get the roof repaired ?

Inquiring minds want to know. I think .........

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RE: Smiley Story - 4/14/2008 8:26:42 PM

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LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(it rather scares me that it made sense to me....)

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RE: Smiley Story - 4/14/2008 10:29:16 PM

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lol! yeah it is scary you can follow it huh!

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RE: Smiley Story - 4/14/2008 11:01:00 PM

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So did she marry the guy or not ?

Dammit.

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RE: Smiley Story - 4/15/2008 11:36:59 AM

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The whole argument started over him reading the newspaper????

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RE: Smiley Story - 4/15/2008 12:54:24 PM

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excellent. thanks for the smile.

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RE: Smiley Story - 4/15/2008 1:09:26 PM

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Imediately grabs the reader and the action is consistent throughout. Plot exposition is well done, however the characters seem underdeveloped...rather two dimensional. Overall a very enjoyable read.

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RE: Smiley Story - 4/15/2008 1:57:46 PM

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All right, for those who are confused, here’s how it goes:

Our protagonist has a nagging shrewish wife and they often get into a fights. Unable to take it anymore he takes off and gets drunk at a strip bar until he passes out. Waking up later with a hangover, he feels bad about the fight and decides to make it up to her with some flowers. Arriving home he discovers his wife being dominated by another man. This hits him like a ton of bricks and really pisses him off. So she wants to be dominated, huh? Okay then. He goes inside, fights with the other man, and beats the crap out of him. Then he takes his revenge on his wife by giving her the domination she’s been craving all this time. It works and now she is a obedient wife who does household chores without complaint and entertains him with his own private strip show. Life is now good for our protagonist (and his wife as well).

There are no immediate plans for a sequel.

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RE: Smiley Story - 4/15/2008 2:08:30 PM

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RE: Smiley Story - 4/15/2008 2:19:16 PM

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This was brilliant on a visual comic level.

The content... huh... to be discussed

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RE: Smiley Story - 4/15/2008 2:29:11 PM

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All these new smileys are fun. Are you having a slow day at work?

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RE: Smiley Story - 4/15/2008 4:35:22 PM

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Vendaval: Actually it was on Saturday afternoon, a quarter after four or so. I was just looking at all the new smileys and it just kind of hit me, Whoa, dude, I bet you could tell a story with these.

Kittensol: If you don’t like the content, write your own! Just kidding!

Actually, it would be interesting to see what other people can come up with. I don’t doubt that my psyche – I’m a non practicing member of the First Church of Gor (Reformed) – played a role in the "plot development."

BitaTruble: I haven’t been told I rock since my early thirties! Thanks (and thanks to everyone else for their compliments).

Seriously folks, I bet there are other stories hiding in all those smiley’s. Go for it! See what you can come up with.

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RE: Smiley Story - 4/15/2008 10:54:28 PM

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just playing around....lol

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RE: Smiley Story - 4/15/2008 10:58:34 PM

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just playing around....lol

dont....ummmm....cant remember....
guess its time for me to get some sleep....lol....if i remember where my bed is....good night A/all

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