cjan
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Nice poem, HippieK, and crushing is such fun, ain't it ? Perhaps, HK, a new and pleasant challenge for you would be putting your feelings for tee in Haiku form. Kinda distill the water imagery into it's essence. Perhaps something about drinking/gargling the lady's ,ummm, bathwater ? Yes, it's classy. And Steele, sir, I like and admire you as well. In fact if you were a woman, I would...ummm, nevermind. But, get a grip, dude. You are sounding a bit like Sally Field at the Oscars.
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"I never saw a wild thing sorry for itself. A bird will fall ,frozen , dead, from a bough without ever having felt sorry for itself."- D.H. L " When you look into the abyss, the abyss also looks in to you"- Frank Nitti
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