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Submissive Love - 7/24/2004 8:51:52 AM   
slavezaylia


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Out of the darkness he comes.
He walks with control and superiority.
He know his powers over her are real.
He feels and sees her fear and love.
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Within the light of the room, she waits.
She sits in a way that shows her submissiveness.
She is weak but strong enough to life this life.
She feels His love and dominancy over her.
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Grabbin her by the hair he pulls her to her knees.
Forcing her to submit to His will again.
With her hands behind her back in pain.
He brings her down on Him for the pleasure only she can give.
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Givin into His desires is all she know and lives for.
To push against His will is unheard of and unthinkable.
For such things will surely bring about His wrath of pain.
But deep within her, she seeks the pain of that wrath again.
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With His pleasure spent and His desire fulfilled for now.
He feels her shiverin at His feet, waitin to know she did good or not.
He reaches down and gently pulls her into His arms, and sees her tears.
He whispers in her ear "You did good my slave, no more tears tonight".
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RE: Submissive Love - 7/24/2004 3:12:19 PM   
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i liked it
S Dee

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Only when the body is bound, can the soul truly be free to soar.

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RE: Submissive Love - 7/24/2004 3:27:51 PM   
slavezaylia


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Thank you

Was my first try at a poem of this style.

slave zaylia

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