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RE: gitting noticed. - 6/12/2008 1:13:17 AM   
JulieorSarah


Posts: 552
Joined: 8/25/2007
Status: offline 		Hello tosted
i just looked at your profile and it has quite a few negative statements.  Change them or remove them ...

... and when emailing or posting anything read it out loud before sending ... if it sounds wrong, it probably reads wrong.

i don't know you, however i've just made an attempt at what is on your profile now and taken out the negative stuff as i saw it .. it needs more than this ... you've made a start, and many on hear update and change their profile, as their lives change it's only an example,  It's a little bland.  It would be an idea to add what you offer, what you like, don't like. and it is important to spell well the words you use.  some of the techno stuff may need to be more correct, i know nothing about youtube, webcams and mics.

what ever you put in your profile have someone you know and respect to give you their opinion before posting.it

good luck!

..... my 2 cents worth ...

I’m seeking the company of someone who I can enjoy and they me …
 
A shy male, who can attach quickly, looking for a switch, or a submissive, someone who can bring the best out in me. 
I like to love and am looking for something long term.
 
Please no males, or slaves.
 
Eliza is my little dog, there’s a photo of her.
 
I have a mic and a webcam if you’d like to start  one on one   Please message me and we can arrange it.
 
You can find me on tost3d in Yahoo, Youtube or Google.
 
Looking forward to hearing from you …

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RE: gitting noticed. - 6/12/2008 3:04:52 AM   
pinksugarsub


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i'm not running a free editing service, tosted.  But i took a look, and my advice is to proofread Yr profile so that grammar and spelling are correctly done, at the very least.
 
Best wishes.
 
pinksugarsub

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RE: gitting noticed. - 6/12/2008 3:23:46 AM   
Asherdelampyr


Posts: 9556
Joined: 11/14/2006
From: The Desert
Status: offline 		Your profile reads like a puppy thats been kicked too many times... If there is enough shit going on in your life that you have lost your confidence in yourself then a woman of any type is probably the absolut last thing you should be looking for.

as far as your profile goes? nobody is going to care whether or not you kicked people off of anything, unless they are the people you kicked, and even then, not for long. If I were you I would get rid of that piece of info.

Also "

i hope im the right person for someone to enjoy my company."
Get rid of this sentence, replace it with what you are looking for.

What are your strengths? are you a good listener? are you well versed on a variety of topics? can you carry an intelligent conversation? can you deliver a good spanking?

Reading your profile looks more like a list of reasons someone wouldn't want to contact you, whereas it should be a list of reasons for them to.




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RE: gitting noticed. - 6/23/2008 12:32:34 PM   
tosted


Posts: 22
Joined: 12/31/2006
Status: offline 		i have re done my profile. how dose it look?

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RE: gitting noticed. - 6/23/2008 12:43:39 PM   
pinkieplum


Posts: 84
Status: offline 		Much better, tosted.
 
It's a shame CollarMe won't allow You to change nicks without creating a new profile.
 
The word is spelled 'toasted', not 'tosted'  I'm not sure why You chose this nick -- the first thing that comes to my mind when i see it is 'drunky'.
 
You might not be aware of it, but it's common for Dominants to begin Their nicks with a capital letter -- and for s-types to begin theirs with a lowercase letter.
 
Anyway, big improvement.
 
pinkieplum.

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RE: gitting noticed. - 6/23/2008 12:48:23 PM   
Owner59


Posts: 17033
Joined: 3/14/2006
From: Dirty Jersey
Status: offline 		 You want to build confidence and long term inner strength?

Go earn a black belt in Okinawan or Japanese karate.

It`ll take a while,but will be well worth the time.

Added,you have a computer,get a spell/grammar check program.Windows Office has one.Learn to use it.

There`s nothing more un-attractive than poor spelling and grammar.

Humble is good.But you`re flat out putting yourself down.Read other profiles and how they flow.

IMO,people who complain in their profile or journal look bad.Dominants don`t come off as dominant,subs don`t seem very submissive when they rant and whine.

No one wants to read that stuff.

< Message edited by Owner59 -- 6/23/2008 12:58:34 PM >

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RE: gitting noticed. - 6/23/2008 12:53:37 PM   
stef


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quote:

ORIGINAL: pinkieplum

You might not be aware of it, but it's common for Dominants to begin Their nicks with a capital letter -- and for s-types to begin theirs with a lowercase letter.

It's common on roleplaying IRC channels and in chat rooms, but it's hardly a rule anywhere.

Tosted, it's a good start.  Since your goal here is to find a partner, you might want to take some time and write a little more about yourself to give people a better idea about the kind of person you are.  The checklists are all well and good, but they really don't say much about the person who has those likes and dislikes.  There is a lot of competition out there, what can you say about yourself that will make you stand out in that crowd?

~stef


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RE: gitting noticed. - 6/23/2008 2:26:20 PM   
kiwisub12


Posts: 4742
Joined: 1/11/2006
Status: offline 		SPELLING - oh goddess - spelling!!!!!

I laugh at the "git r done" man - but i wouldn't want to date him.

clean up your spelling  - for the love of Mike!

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RE: gitting noticed. - 6/23/2008 3:56:03 PM   
sophia37


Posts: 1433
Joined: 2/7/2006
Status: offline 		My first thought is, I cant blame you for hating the school system. They seriously did you wrong by allowing you out the door as an illiterate. Its very sad. I wish you the best and at the risk of offending you, suggest you find a way to get the help you need. You will struggle all your life with your inability to write. You'll never be a manager or a boss. And while you may never want to be those things, wouldnt it be nice if it were by choice and not because you're unable? Work on yourself before you look for anyone else. Put yourself first. You are still young. But youth and age keeps marching forward. 

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RE: gitting noticed. - 6/23/2008 5:42:03 PM   
ThinkingKitten


Posts: 447
Joined: 6/15/2006
From: Ontari-ari-o
Status: offline 		So sophia - you're the one who messed up "tosted" (aka toasted)?

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RE: gitting noticed. - 6/23/2008 11:13:27 PM   
tosted


Posts: 22
Joined: 12/31/2006
Status: offline 		pinkieplum - my name as i actual spelled it on other websites is "T0St3D" have a look in google. and thanks for the complement.

stef - thank you for the input.

sophia37 - well sead. it is sad but true. you have not offended me at all.

ThinkingKitten - do what?


< Message edited by tosted -- 6/23/2008 11:21:35 PM >

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RE: gitting noticed. - 6/24/2008 6:22:52 AM   
Silkendream


Posts: 65
Joined: 10/29/2007
Status: offline 		Just to let you know - I can't make out a word of your video introduction

Good luck.

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RE: gitting noticed. - 6/24/2008 6:34:11 AM   
DarkSteven


Posts: 28072
Joined: 5/2/2008
Status: offline 		Just to clarify a point.

tosted, the others have given you advice on why you're not getting contacts after someone's read your profile.  However, there's also the fact that you're a man and there are lots of those here.  I have contacted women when I find either their profile or else a comment made in the forum, interesting to me.

But your original question asked why you were not getting VIEWS.  Simply, the women on collarme don't view profiles much.  They don't need to (men will seek them out) and being women, they don't have that much spare time.




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RE: gitting noticed. - 6/24/2008 9:36:28 AM   
VMsServant


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Joined: 5/19/2008
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quote:

ORIGINAL: Lynnxz

Ok, lets go through your profile.

i hope im the right person for someone to enjoy my company. my grammer sucks i hated the school system i still do.
Don't admit this.

i have a real problem with authority but i dont have a record as of yet.
Awesome, whoever is checking out your profile now realizes you like to do stupid things, and may soon get caught doing them.

no one is intrested in me is it because im a virgen? "well for the people who think it's funny EAT A BIG PILE OF SHIT". is it beause im shy? probly boath.
Telling people to eat a big pile, is probably not the best way to make friends, or attract girls.

all my life i git made fun of because of being a virgen and being the one to ban ppl off servers im admin on. they hate me cause i banned them. sucks for them. lol.
What..?

ive been looking for that some one.

i am looking for a switch, Submissives but not slaves or men. i am looking for some one to git me off this computer and bring the best out of me. i like to love. looking for long term.
You might not realize this, but you are the best person to get yourself off of the computer. The internets is for porn, and Collarme. That is all.

i git attached fast.
Sweet. You're clingy. Just what every girl dreams of.


LMAO!

That profile is awesome!.."they hate me cause i banned them. sucks for them.lol." ahahahahahaha!!!!!

Why am I reminded of Napoleon Dynamite. LOL

But in all seriousness...there's some good advice in this thread...did you change your profile? Start there. lol

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RE: gitting noticed. - 6/24/2008 9:39:06 AM   
Owner59


Posts: 17033
Joined: 3/14/2006
From: Dirty Jersey
Status: offline 		Buy and ride a Harley, is another way to get noticed.

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RE: gitting noticed. - 7/1/2008 9:59:08 AM   
tosted


Posts: 22
Joined: 12/31/2006
Status: offline 		only if you have 50 to 60 thousand dollars. why do other people in other countries awaes whant your money its bull shit its total bull shit. dont they know the value of  a dollar gose down every day here in the fucking us of a.

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RE: gitting noticed. - 7/1/2008 12:49:39 PM   
Maya2001


Posts: 1656
Joined: 8/22/2007
From: Woodstock ONT,CANADA
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If your
quote:

ORIGINAL: tosted

only if you have 50 to 60 thousand dollars. why do other people in other countries awaes whant your money its bull shit its total bull shit. dont they know the value of  a dollar gose down every day here in the fucking us of a.


If you are saying a Harley is 50 to 60K ..you have just told us you do not have money  and 2007 can be picked up for 15K  ...I am not in the US of A and believe me I am not interested in your money ...I would probably reject you for lack of it as I would be more concerned about getting stuck supporting you as I probably earn more than you.  ..your lack of confidence and the rudeness you showed to the other ladies that offered advice and help, as well as your assumptions that others in other countries are just scam artists ..   would be even  bigger reasons...   I will give credit where it is due... the current profile is a big improvement from the original.. My advice take care of dealing with any angers you have and build your self esteem and confidence and take time to broaden you knowledge ... you will be ineffective and more likely harmful  as a Dom if you cannot master and control yourself


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RE: gitting noticed. - 7/1/2008 1:11:06 PM   
Lockit


Posts: 11292
Joined: 5/7/2007
Status: offline 		You are a young man who seems to have little control over his own life and I can't say that I know many submissive's that are looking for that.  You say you are a dominant, but are seeking dominant, submissive, etc. women.  It sounds like you are simply seeking a woman; any woman... just to get a woman.  Refine yourself and make yourself someone can see some value in.  I typically don't come down on anyone for spelling and such, but if English is your first language... you insult it with your useage.  When we have to try to figure out what the hell you are saying with your broken English, it makes it hard to take you seriously. 

Who wants a dominant that they can't respect for at least trying to improve themselves?  I wouldn't even consider anyone seriously if they didn't take themselves, our lifestyle or much of anything else seriously.  Do your homework, stop whining or get used to the situation you find yourself in.

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RE: gitting noticed. - 7/2/2008 11:19:48 AM   
YourhandMyAss


Posts: 5516
Joined: 6/25/2006
From: Sacramento
Status: offline 		Why hide things. I'm a huge fan of truth in advertsiing if he don't like the school systems very much say so. If he's grammar illiterate say so.
quote:

ORIGINAL: Lynnxz

Ok, lets go through your profile.

i hope im the right person for someone to enjoy my company. my grammer sucks i hated the school system i still do.
Don't admit this.

i have a real problem with authority but i dont have a record as of yet.
Awesome, whoever is checking out your profile now realizes you like to do stupid things, and may soon get caught doing them.

no one is intrested in me is it because im a virgen? "well for the people who think it's funny EAT A BIG PILE OF SHIT". is it beause im shy? probly boath.
Telling people to eat a big pile, is probably not the best way to make friends, or attract girls.

all my life i git made fun of because of being a virgen and being the one to ban ppl off servers im admin on. they hate me cause i banned them. sucks for them. lol.
What..?

ive been looking for that some one.

i am looking for a switch, Submissives but not slaves or men. i am looking for some one to git me off this computer and bring the best out of me. i like to love. looking for long term.
You might not realize this, but you are the best person to get yourself off of the computer. The internets is for porn, and Collarme. That is all.

i git attached fast.
Sweet. You're clingy. Just what every girl dreams of.

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RE: gitting noticed. - 8/15/2008 2:23:20 AM   
tosted


Posts: 22
Joined: 12/31/2006
Status: offline 		OOPS delete this post plz NOT TOPIC thx.

Toasted

< Message edited by tosted -- 8/15/2008 2:24:47 AM >

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