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SinLee -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/15/2008 5:04:20 AM)
thanks for reading. i try to write forms once in awhile (sonnets and others), they're difficult sometimes to get the true emotion across in. glad it touched you :)

mindfullyYours -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/15/2008 5:21:11 AM)
respectfully offered: i write to know i’m me. i write to be me. i write to feel like me. i write, “me” and then sign my name -Redundantly

SinLee -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/15/2008 12:17:01 PM)
nice, mindfully :) Torn. I sit obsessing over every detail of you that i have come to know i obsess over every line and every curve of your face i obsess over that look in your eyes that could pierce steel i obsess over those lips, commands they could bring, or kisses i obsess over your voice that burns through my body like fire but then i look down, away from your face, away from you i wonder what you think about when it's not my words in your ear i wonder what you want from me, if it's more than just on here i wonder what you see in me, if anything at all i wonder how i need you so much, not knowing you at all i wonder if you could be what i think you are or if i'm just creating another false idol of who i want you to be i obsess about the words you speak to me, i wish always for more i obsess about the time we share, and our time apart i obsess about all the little things that make you steal my heart i obsess about your health and happiness, wishing i could do more i obsess about your life before, and what of your life ahead do you ever wonder about me kneeling before you, to serve, to please i wonder if you'll ever allow me to come to you on my knees i wonder if you even want me to be more than just your tease i wonder if you're looking for someone to be at your side i wonder if you were, would you let me try i wonder so often, i wonder why i wonder anymore. So tell me, do i please you? Do you want more than just a toy? Am I just another stupid girl with a crush on a cute little boy? Do you want me to want you, the way that i do? Could you ever consider wanting me as much as i want you? Sinamynlee

favesclava -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/17/2008 12:06:00 PM)
i never saw my beauty til He looked at me never knew my strength til i knelt at His feet never knew how to be free til His chains were on me. ------------------------------------------------------- i have wandered but have found home and this need to please is so strong He took me by my hand and said "Mine" looked and saw past my disguise what no other could see the lonely little girl in me showed me pain and pleasure are one when touched by such a Man. ------------------------------------------ COLLARED The collar around my neck tells me its too late never had a chance silly girl The collar around my neck but i wont love Him wont let Him into my heart He's the Master He will take what He wants silly girl The collar around my neck tells me i am owned body , mind , heart and soul lucky girl

babygirlangel -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/18/2008 2:50:28 PM)
edited to say... ok, maybe this is a bit much for here... but i'll leave it anyway The Flood Many times I’ve thought I’ve said all there is to say Yet the feelings behind the words refuse to go away I force down each repetitive negative thought Yet behind them my feelings remain fraught I can’t stop feeling like there’s something wrong I can’t make it better, I’ve never been that strong These words aren’t the ones that really want out So many times I just want to cry and shout I cant figure out how to just say what I mean, for real Its maddening, always needing to apologize for what I feel When asked if I’m ok I just nod and go on, turning and taking flight You know when people ask, they’re really just being polite I try to behave as an adult should, restrained, calm, collected Hoping on the outside that my feelings aren’t detected Yet, too, wishing that I could just let these feelings go Knowing the consequences should they continue to grow But someday the day will come, sooner than later for me What little control I have will lapse and then I’ll be… Raving like a mad woman futilely against the bars of my prison cell, Internalizing everything until the dam breaks and pours out my hell Torrents of hate and hurt drowning everyone I know or love Seeing in their eyes their bewilderment, as I thrash and shove I stifle my emotions because it’s better than exploding So I stifle them again and again, without emptying, reloading And it builds and builds like a storm waiting to break A cataclysm in the making, my foundations shake So, I stay awake, not sleeping till I’m exhausted, almost all night Not wanting to wake again, it hurts to face the light Wearing myself out until I’m too tired to feel pain Even though I know I’ll just have to do it again I never really want to get up and face the next day It’ll just be the same thing again in a slightly different way I don’t know why I feel so much hurt, so much hate I don’t know if I made myself this way or if it was fate Even though I don’t place much faith in much of anything I still have a belief that there must be some… thing… Perhaps someone to hold me and take care of me Or maybe being all alone so I can’t be hurt, you see Inside and out, I’m always looking for the cure Maybe I’m the problem, simple and pure The cause doesn’t seem nearly so important now Whatever it may be, I must stand or bow Calm on the outside, inside swirling in confusion Waiting for the end, death or resolution

favesclava -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/19/2008 6:43:46 AM)
wow.

SinLee -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/19/2008 7:24:54 AM)
Death comes to all, one before another. so, indeed, came the days when i existed soley for the look in your eyes and when my sight faded i lived in memory then came the days when i lived for the sound of your voice when you would sing to me the songs of our first months together and in the french i taught you you would whisper that you loved me but my hearing faded and again i lived in memory i learned to live only in the sweetness of your gentle kiss and nothing meant more to me your loving kiss in the middle of the night when you believed i slept but i lost the feeling in my face and could no longer feel your soft lips so again, i would remember and i once, not long ago lived singly for your warm embrace the feel of your fingers, your hands your arms against my skin trying to wash away my pain but i can no longer feel them i wish to remember, but... i live now only in pain in my conciousness, knowing i can never see the tender look of your blue eyes nor hear the beautiful words eminate from your mouth nor taste the succulant sweetness of your kiss nor may i feel the sensuality, the comfort of your embrace i remember when i knew them, took for granted the signs of your love let me die now, before i know not if i die alone Je t'aime, mon cher. Au revoir. Until i may know you again. sinamynlee

babygirlangel -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/19/2008 9:48:40 PM)
now THAT was awesome, SinLee.. thanks for sharing

SinLee -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/19/2008 11:49:04 PM)
thank you so much babygirl, yours was as well, this one was actually written when i was about 16... i've always loved to write (hence why i keep posting in here, lol)

puppen -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/20/2008 5:25:08 AM)
I will await you In death In sin Burning Bwahaha, short.

SinLee -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/20/2008 6:04:33 AM)
Eclipse We are the sun and the moon we are together we are apart I am the sun he is the moon we are occasionally seen together and we shine together in perfect harmony and sometimes we come together so perfectly that all else fades to black. Sinamynlee

SweetNika -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (7/21/2008 12:26:39 AM)
Sir... By: Nika 07/20/08 Sir, I kneel before you Supplicant Pleading in silence for your simple touch Pleasure and pain intertwined Ecstasy in the power exchange Burning desire Quivering flesh Bend me to your will Claim me as yours Dominate my very being Bend me to your will Hold me close Protecting me from the wilds of the world As I serve you, Please you, We two fulfill one another’s every need You are my Sir and I am yours.

SweetNika -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (7/21/2008 12:41:49 AM)
Strange Desire..... By Nika 07/17/08 My breath grows weary, My tanned cheeks flush , My ache, my desire… To feel your touch, Your hand upon my raven hair, I desire to be yours, To have you push me further, To own my very soul, Driven by simple need, By the desire to please, At your feet is where I long to be. Your touch, You calm my racing heart, You answer my childish inquiries, My desire can not seem so stranger… You are strong and enticing, Like the north wind that blows, Your desire for me is fleeting. Your eyes, Your gaze upon me lasting only a heart beat, In the dim moon light , Can you the desire I try to hide? The warmth of my lips, The wanting of my flesh, My pleading eyes - Do they reveal to you what I hide so deep inside? I once had a strange desire, It lasted for seasons, My heart beats within my heaving breasts, Bathing in the moon beams this night, Silent, afraid, slightly ashamed, Of this strange wanting, Of this strange desire, To be yours. Your friend, your slave, your slut, your every desire.

favesclava -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (8/12/2008 7:40:23 AM)
if i had known i wouldnt have said a word if i had known i would have cried alone if i had known my pain would have been mine alone if i had known i would never kneel again if i had known i would never be daddy's girl again if i had know the collar wasnt so strong i would have never said a word if i had known how much i have lost my heart would have built higher walls if i had known how useless it is to believe in dreams i would have cried lone i would have never said a word

TwilightShadows -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (8/23/2008 10:17:44 AM)
Not to be a party pooper, but I suggest you all copywright. It's cheap and it's easy, and you won't have the unpleasant experience of reading your bastardized words elsewhere. That being said....I just posted a poem in my journal on my profile.

Raechard -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (8/23/2008 10:37:02 AM)
Ah no one reads them after they fall off the bottom of the list.

christine1 -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (8/23/2008 11:56:13 AM)
quote: ORIGINAL: Level There once was a dom from Nantucket Who got his head stuck in a bucket I'm still working on the rest..... [8\|] He woke up with a fright, in the mid of the night, and he said, i'd be better off if i fucked it. sorry, i tried.

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