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Trying a hand at Filking... - 7/8/2008 5:39:58 PM

RuheMaus

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My Favorite Things - Collarme Style

Subbies in bondage and brats in punishment mittens
Lashing and thrashing and confessions written
Marvelous leathermen and the pleasures they bring!
These are a few of my favorite things...

Writhing in passion and whippings with leather.
'Little girl' ageplayers that are held on a tether
Gag-silenced promises, hard biting stings.
These are a few of my favorite things!

When the paddle bites, when the whip stings, When I'm feeling down...
I simply remember the collarme folks, and then I can't hold, a frown!

< Message edited by RuheMaus -- 7/8/2008 5:44:44 PM >

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RE: Trying a hand at Filking... - 7/8/2008 5:44:12 PM

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Damn... now the voices are singing it in my head!

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RE: Trying a hand at Filking... - 7/8/2008 5:46:40 PM

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Then my work here is done!

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RE: Trying a hand at Filking... - 7/9/2008 1:13:35 AM

HypnoticDan

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the song normally has three verses, so i wrote one more.

public play, tooth marks, and wax covered nipples,
service sub rubbing my stress-heavy temples,
the tinkling sound of her collar's o-ring,
these are a few of my favorite things!

ruhemaus - nice work. I humbly suggest you drop "brats in" from the first line to fix the rhythm.

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RE: Trying a hand at Filking... - 7/10/2008 3:00:41 AM

JulieorSarah

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