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BDSM poetry - 7/19/2008 1:02:26 PM

sfdrew

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I just thought I would share a poem I wrote for Mistress when W/we started talking again last year. I had written more than this but I lost the papers they were written on.

I hope you all enjoy this and perhaps you can share some of your favorite BDSM poetry.

Submission

Some were made to take control
Others made to give their soul
Their lives and fate intertwined
Seeking the pleasures of the mind

Only in shackles can one see
True happiness achieved
Giving one's heart mind and soul
To live for loss of self control

All my thoughts, dreams, and hopes
They are Hers to keep, and to hold
i know only joy which She gives to me
A greater joy the world shall never see

i live within the prison of Her heart
A place i wish never to depart
my submission to Her is complete
Kneeling down now, before Her feet

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RE: BDSM poetry - 7/19/2008 1:12:11 PM

RedMagic1

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If you search "poetry" (using the Search tool in the upper right or lower right of your screen) you'll see other threads with examples, including a thread that's only a week or so old.

Maybe the most touching example of submission driven by love that I've ever heard is "Cater 2 U" by Destiny's Child. Video here:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HiuR4J_IYUk

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RE: BDSM poetry - 7/19/2008 8:46:35 PM

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Hi.

That's a beautiful poem. She should really luv it.

I luv slaves sending me poems, stories, and articles.

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RE: BDSM poetry - 7/19/2008 9:07:07 PM

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Everybody's taking a similar stance now
(Come on baby, use the search function)
I know that you will like it if you give it a chance now
(Come on baby, use the search function)
Look to the top right of the screen till the word 'search' you see
It's easier than learning your ABC
So come on, come on
Use the search function with me

You got to find the word 'search' now, come on baby
Use your mouse, and click, when I think you've got the knack
Whoa whoa just type in the keywords for the info you wanna gain now
(Come on baby, use the search function)
A little bit of reading with not much pain now
(Come on baby, use the search function)
Do it nice and easy, don't lose control
And you'll find all the information you want to know
Come on, come on
Use the search function with me

Yay yay yay yay
Move around the boards using the search function
(Come on baby, use the search function)
Use your keyboard and mouse and you'll get the notion
(Come on baby, use the search function)
There's never been a function that's so easy to do
It really is so simple you don't need a clue
So come on come on, use the search function with me
You got to find the word 'search' now, that's right
You're doing fine, come on baby
Use your mouse, just one click, you're looking good...

with apologies to Little Eva (not a CM member)

< Message edited by stella41b -- 7/19/2008 9:08:15 PM >

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