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seaturtle50 -> RE: slaves our profile please (1/8/2006 4:43:53 PM)
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Personally, I think your profile is fine, and does appear to say what you wish to convey.
From my own perspective, I think that maybe (that’s ultimately for you to determine) you are being a little too "nice?"
I do not mean to say that i think you should be mean or rude, just that for me i am naturally more attracted to a Domme who is a bit more forceful in her statements. Who seems to say (sometimes even "between the lines") that she is entirely capable of knowing what is best for me, and that her wants, needs, and desires are to be considered higher priorities than my own.
One simple part of the profile, stating that you are fair, loving, caring, and respectful of hard limits etc., would do the trick. Yours seems to emphasize those points in each part.
I, for one, am far more attracted to a profile where i feel somewhat dominated even from the tone of the profile itself. It helps me to feel "compelled." In this case, compelled to answer.
Just food for thought.
s-turtle
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