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RE: Valentine is coming, who will write a poem to their... - 1/23/2009 11:44:51 AM

GoddessTeaze

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ORIGINAL: akisha

This is our first Valentines actually together instead of long distance and the our anniversary is not long after so I was thinking of trying to write up something original.

I used to be a darn good writer and have even had small things published but for this I'm having serious writers block lol everything sounds dumb when I read it over.

rubberpet... that was hilarious *S*

Well that's awesome to be together.

To write you need some time on your own,

to concentrate and let the words come to you.

And a writersblock sucks, I know that been there..

I do hope the words will find you though.

Warm Greetingz

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RE: Valentine is coming, who will write a poem to their... - 1/23/2009 5:09:09 PM

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Daddy and I don't do valentines day either, I mean we do go out to eat do something fun together, but we don't do the traditional man buys women chocolates and flowers or gifts or jewlery, and woos her. And I don't waste money on sappy greeting cards that I spent a long time picking out.

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ORIGINAL: oceanwynds

Sir does not do valentines day.

So, my writing talents will not be given that day.

Interesting thing, I too am not one for this Hallmark day.

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RE: Valentine is coming, who will write a poem to their... - 1/23/2009 5:54:17 PM

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Roses are Red
Violet are Blue
My sweet kinky MIstress
I love you!

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RE: Valentine is coming, who will write a poem to their... - 1/23/2009 6:43:20 PM

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Even if I had a Dom, I don't think I'd write him a poem... I wouldn't want to make him sad.

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RE: Valentine is coming, who will write a poem to their... - 1/23/2009 7:22:21 PM

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ORIGINAL: parakeet89

Even if I had a Dom, I don't think I'd write him a poem... I wouldn't want to make him sad.

I don't have one either, but here goes:

The Mistress I seek, unknown to me as yet
Desires to find her perfect matching pet

She bears an itch that lies beyond her reach
I yearn to scratch for she who deigns to teach

Until the day that she's to me revealed
I'll dream on her with lips politely sealed

And if by chance we meet on Valentine's
I'll part my lips and kiss her taut behind

yours

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RE: Valentine is coming, who will write a poem to their... - 1/23/2009 7:31:14 PM

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Roses Are Red,

And So Is Your Period.

That's all so far, could you just cry or what?

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RE: Valentine is coming, who will write a poem to their... - 1/23/2009 7:51:38 PM

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No,I can't write poetry,not even a haiku.

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RE: Valentine is coming, who will write a poem to their... - 1/23/2009 8:31:17 PM

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Roses are RED
Violets are BLUE
Come sit on my FACE
And with my tongue I will write I LOVE YOU

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RE: Valentine is coming, who will write a poem to their... - 1/24/2009 3:56:40 AM

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Every day can be Valentine's Day if you make a little effort.

And we do.

stella

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RE: Valentine is coming, who will write a poem to their... - 1/24/2009 4:36:07 AM

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Ye ole romantic

I adore poetry and do write. Reality is romantic in his own special way, he would rather show me in every day actions how much I mean to him which is wonderful and my life is so rich because of that.

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RE: Valentine is coming, who will write a poem to their... - 1/24/2009 9:52:05 AM

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I probably will...I've written them before for Valentine's Day and write them *just because* too. I wrote this last year, to make him laugh because he's never said he loves me and I rarely have either.

Thing is..

I push the usual words away,
They just won't do this time.
I want to write about this *thing*
(My dearest Valentine)

Not one soppy word of love
Will pass my lips,I vow.
This is ALL about the *thing*
(I love you, anyhow)

The *thing* is not at all the same,
It's eaten me up whole,
So love will not be mentioned,
(Nor giving you my soul)

I do not have to say that word
To tell you how I feel,
I know the *thing* can say it all,
(My love is deep and real)

The *thing* is ALL I'll write about,
Although it makes me sore
To never mention love again,
(I love you to my core)

The *thing* is much more precious,
The *thing* is what I gave.
I never have to mention love
(Because I am your slave)

And this...

A Different Time

The clock-face hands
No longer measure time
When you're in my space.
It's metered by an oyster
Tipped to my lips
And by warm sand
Beneath my naked back.
Or a boat trip where
You slip an arm around
And pull me to you.
This is how it flies
And how it lingers,
Carried on a laugh,
However fleeting,
It can fill a day.
And when your will
Is buried in my mind,
It stands still.

It doesn't have to be Valentines or any *special* time, it's just nice to write really.

agirl

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RE: Valentine is coming, who will write a poem to their... - 1/24/2009 10:29:14 AM

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I have the "lazy" habit of re-writing sonnets and odes from the romantic poets. There are also some really good ones that can be updated with a few words from the Greek and Roman poets. I KNOW i am not a poet, but i do love poetry.

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RE: Valentine is coming, who will write a poem to their... - 1/24/2009 11:56:24 PM

GoddessTeaze

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ORIGINAL: parakeet89

Even if I had a Dom, I don't think I'd write him a poem... I wouldn't want to make him sad.

It's the effort that counts right?
Not everyone is Shakespeare.

I wish you enough.

GoddezzT`

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RE: Valentine is coming, who will write a poem to their... - 1/25/2009 12:03:26 AM

GoddessTeaze

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ORIGINAL: YoursMistress
I don't have one either, but here goes:

The Mistress I seek, unknown to me as yet
Desires to find her perfect matching pet

She bears an itch that lies beyond her reach
I yearn to scratch for she who deigns to teach

Until the day that she's to me revealed
I'll dream on her with lips politely sealed

And if by chance we meet on Valentine's
I'll part my lips and kiss her taut behind
yours

Awesome your poem.
Always love to see what people write.
This is one of Mine:

For the littleone

As I have
earned
your trust

you slowly
let me peel
your layers

carefully
taking them
one by one

admiring
your courage
and strength

observing
the hurt which
lies beneath

gently holding
you through
the rain of tears

happily
supporting your
inner growth

enjoying
how letting go
will set you free

GoddezzT`

< Message edited by GoddessTeaze -- 1/25/2009 12:04:58 AM >

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RE: Valentine is coming, who will write a poem to their... - 1/25/2009 12:06:53 AM

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ORIGINAL: ALAstella
Every day can be Valentine's Day if you make a little effort.

And we do.

stella

I write dayly poetry,
so for Me it's every day Valentine
It's just a day to think about it, so I thought I would ask
who writes too. I wish you enough

GoddezzT`

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RE: Valentine is coming, who will write a poem to their... - 1/25/2009 12:08:38 AM

GoddessTeaze

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ORIGINAL: MissMorrigan

Ye ole romantic

I adore poetry and do write. Reality is romantic in his own special way, he would rather show me in every day actions how much I mean to him which is wonderful and my life is so rich because of that.

You and Me both ole romantics!
I love it, although it's not always about Love,
but everything which moves Me in life.
Would love to read a poem from you.

Have a goodone

GoddezzT`

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RE: Valentine is coming, who will write a poem to their... - 1/25/2009 12:12:06 AM

GoddessTeaze

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ORIGINAL: agirl

I probably will...I've written them before for Valentine's Day and write them *just because* too. I wrote this last year, to make him laugh because he's never said he loves me and I rarely have either.

It doesn't have to be Valentines or any *special* time, it's just nice to write really.

agirl

Awesome to've read your poems and no it's not just for that day, it's for any day, but not everyone is a poet grinz.
I wish you allot of fun writing.

Warm Greetingz

GoddezzT`

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RE: Valentine is coming, who will write a poem to their... - 1/25/2009 12:13:35 AM

GoddessTeaze

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ORIGINAL: feydeplume

I have the "lazy" habit of re-writing sonnets and odes from the romantic poets. There are also some really good ones that can be updated with a few words from the Greek and Roman poets. I KNOW i am not a poet, but i do love poetry.

Wwe all started one day with writing right? :)
It's great to read poetry, I enjoy that as well.

Warm Greetingz

GoddezzT`

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