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BDSM Poetry - 1/19/2006 9:17:20 AM   
Eir


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Status: offline 		I have written three poems that are really related to my BDSM expirience and I care about them alot, two I wrote to my former dom who loves one of them and HATES the other... and now I have also written one that's just about my thoughts in BDSM... perhaps if there is intress I will post them here?

Is there any other that has written a poem to their dom, former dom or anything? ...just wondering
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RE: BDSM Poetry - 1/19/2006 9:27:36 AM   
Littlepita


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Status: offline 		My Dom is a poet and has written things for me that are very BDSM related. They are so precious to me and I so wish I could write poetry for him, but I wouldnt even attempt it.

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RE: BDSM Poetry - 1/19/2006 9:35:35 AM   
LuckyAlbatross


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Status: offline 		There used to a poetry/writings section here but it got cut out.

There's tons of places to post your own works online if you want.

Unless they have anything to do with a dom's voice, eyes, hands or touch..then I reserve all right to tease mercilessly.

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RE: BDSM Poetry - 1/19/2006 9:36:47 AM   
Eir


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Status: offline 		It's not that hard to write a poem... just write what's in your heart, what there is that you want to say...

---
I've sold my soul, my body
Sweapt away by dreams, illusions
Fragments of my own imagination
Played by feelings emotions

Finding what there is to find
Lost in deepest thoughts
Left in the cold all alone
Depending on someone strong

Been in the dark for so long
Letting go of what I had
Never gaining what I must
Not feeling owned again

Darkest days and brightest nights
All I dream of is my life
I want to be myself
Without a doubt yours to keep

Perhaps I am hidding from you
Showing only my masks
Afraid of letting go
Perhaps, perhaps
---

This is a little something I wrote for someone that got me thinking and feeling submissive again... still so afraid of letting go of my feelings and just get to be the submissive me again... haven't been a sub for more then a half a year to anyone.
If you want to write a poem start by saying to yourself or writing what you would like to tell him and then work from there :)

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RE: BDSM Poetry - 1/19/2006 9:39:15 AM   
Eir


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Status: offline 		I have a site here on Iceland where I store most of my poetry... just a good place to keep them until I am ready to puplish ;)

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RE: BDSM Poetry - 1/19/2006 9:59:33 AM   
Hallittlelolita


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Status: offline 		Yes i have written a poem about 6 months ago telling my husband now Master how i feel about wanting to be a slave for Him. Would you all like to hear it i have been writing poetry since i was 13 and it is sort of a secret skill i have anyways here it goes

You are my Master
you own me mind, body
and soul


Can't You see You put
this key deep inside of me that
no one can see

i am Your's and Your's alone

So do with me what you will
push me on the bed make me kneel

Push me to the limits make me feel


If i be bad make me be good
make me holler make me scream

Tie me up make me gleam

Whips and chains, handcuffs
slap my ass with your belt make
me scream help

Blinfold tease me let me feel Your
touch, the one i long for so much

Can't You see i'm on fire
Can't You see this burning desire

So come on take control
and turn this fantasy into reality


PS: This poem worked



Sincerely Master Hal's lil cumslut slavegirl andie


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RE: BDSM Poetry - 1/19/2006 10:03:56 AM   
Eir


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Status: offline 		I just love your poem! LOVE IT! There are not so many that dare to show at least that they have tried to write... most of my poetry are just attempts but I love to write and it helps me being sane :)

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RE: BDSM Poetry - 1/19/2006 10:06:19 AM   
LuckyAlbatross


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Status: offline 		It's easy to write a poem.

It's hard to write a GOOD and UNIQUE poem.

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RE: BDSM Poetry - 1/19/2006 10:08:10 AM   
Eir


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Status: offline 		That's also true :)

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RE: BDSM Poetry - 1/19/2006 10:26:43 AM   
foxglove716


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Status: offline 		In the spirit of the post, Im going to write a haiku

*hem**hem*

Tie me up, hot stuff
Hang on, I cant feel my hands
Wow, it sure is big!


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RE: BDSM Poetry - 1/19/2006 10:37:57 AM   
Slipstreme


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Status: offline 		I have one I wrote about 4 years ago, before I had a label for wiitwd, back in my roleplaying days on Furcadia (yes the fur thing again, you are going to get this a lot from me). So, of course, I ended up calling it what most everyone else did:

Bondage

Thick heavy metal chains
Pure gunmetal steel
The deep black pit of a smouldering flame
Red fires lick the waiting blaze
deprived of oxygen
waiting to surface
to overwhelm, contain, control

a lancing pain
a cracking whip
a scream
a yelp
Restraining lacerations

Crimson rivers flow forward
spilling, pouring, churning, crashing
Kept near immobile
Thrust against the thick

Riding one's own dark waves
velvety waves...
waves of one's own dark desire
....be thy Slave or Master.

Luckily it works for people and not just furry roleplay characters.
I haven't done any real serious novel and poetry pursuits in a while, but the muse occasionally hits. I just wish I had something newer.

No, I didn't really write this for anyone, but myself. When I write, I write for the sake of writing.

< Message edited by Slipstreme -- 1/19/2006 10:41:11 AM >

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RE: BDSM Poetry - 1/19/2006 10:43:45 AM   
Eir


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Status: offline 		HAHAHHA :D I LOVE your sense of homour... reminds me of me a bit :P

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RE: BDSM Poetry - 1/19/2006 10:47:10 AM   
Eir


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Status: offline 		I write for the sake of my sanity :) I love to write and it helps me alot, there are alot of people here in Iceland trying to get me to puplish because apparently they think I have a talent... I hope I have one There are just so many things to say and why not write some of them if that helps? I don't understand it when people are afraid to express themselves!

Fneah, I am off now and going to get myself some deepfriedshirmps and rice *slurps*

Care. Eir

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RE: BDSM Poetry - 1/19/2006 10:49:55 AM   
fastlane


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quote:

ORIGINAL: foxglove716

In the spirit of the post, Im going to write a haiku

*hem**hem*

Tie me up, hot stuff
Hang on, I cant feel my hands
Wow, it sure is big!


Excellent Foxglove!

How do I strike thee?
Let me count the ways.
With a whip, a crop, a flogger, a paddle.
Ahhh fuck it, where's my baseball bat?

Wow, it sure is big......hmmmm, I know 31" 34oz. Louisville slugger


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RE: BDSM Poetry - 1/19/2006 10:59:45 AM   
foxglove716


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quote:

ORIGINAL: fastlane


quote:

How do I strike thee?
Let me count the ways.
With a whip, a crop, a flogger, a paddle.
Ahhh fuck it, where's my baseball bat?



NICE.

How about....

butcheeks are red
leather is black
I want to feel your paddle
stinging across my crack



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RE: BDSM Poetry - 1/19/2006 12:31:11 PM   
NakedOnMyChain


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Status: offline 		HEHEHEHE! I love it!

How about this one...

Paddles are good
and asses are hairy.
Please smack me around
before you pop my cherry.

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~The Cure

"I ask for so little. Just fear me, love me, do as I say, and I will be your slave."
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RE: BDSM Poetry - 1/19/2006 1:04:39 PM   
fastlane


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Status: offline 		How about

Your cherry WAS red, Your Ass will be too
The red cherry is gone, but your red ass looks like new!

Kevin

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RE: BDSM Poetry - 1/19/2006 1:10:40 PM   
fergus


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Status: offline 		Okay, not BDSM themed, but thought some might relate ;)

A poem's like a fart
and not like everyone thinks
Your own is high art
and everyone else's stinks

fergus

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RE: BDSM Poetry - 1/19/2006 1:14:45 PM   
NakedOnMyChain


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Status: offline 		Very true. Unless someone tells us a poem's good, we wouldn't recognize it. That's the way it seems for most people, at least.

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"Oh, it's torture, but I'm almost there."
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"I ask for so little. Just fear me, love me, do as I say, and I will be your slave."
~The Labyrinth

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RE: BDSM Poetry - 1/19/2006 1:18:11 PM   
fastlane


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Status: offline 		LOL

P.U. Your Poem stinks
or Was that Fergus?




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