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coupleowl -> RE: What's your favorite poem? (3/30/2009 6:46:18 PM)

Annabel Lee

It was many and many a year ago,
In a kingdom by the sea
That a maiden there lived whom you may know
By the name of Annabel Lee--
And this maiden she lived with no other thought
Than to love and be loved by me.

I was a child and she was a child,
In this kingdom by the sea,
But we loved with a love that was more than love--
I and my Annabel Lee--
With a love that the winged seraphs of heaven
Coveted her and me.

And this was the reason that, long ago,
In this kingdom by the sea,
A wind blew out of a cloud, chilling
My beautiful Annabel Lee;
So that her highborn kinsmen came
And bore her away from me,
To shut her up in a sepulchre
In this kingdom by the sea.

The angels, not half so happy in heaven,
Went envying her and me--
Yes!--that was the reason (as all men know,
In this kingdom by the sea)
That the wind came out of the cloud by night,
Chilling and killing my Annabel Lee.

But our love it was stronger by far than the love
Of those who were older than we--
Of many far wiser than we--
And neither the angels in heaven above,
Nor the demons down under the sea,
Can ever dissever my soul from the soul
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee:

For the moon never beams, without bringing me dreams
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee:
And the stars never rise, but I feel the bright eyes
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee:
And so, all the night-tide, I lay down by the side
Of my darling--my darling--my life and my bride,
In the sepulchre there by the sea--
In her tomb by the sounding sea.




Aynne88 -> RE: What's your favorite poem? (3/30/2009 7:01:21 PM)


Pablo Neruda


Sonnet XVII (100 Love Sonnets, 1960) 

I don't love you as if you were the salt-rose, topaz
or arrow of carnations that propagate fire:
I love you as certain dark things are loved,
secretly, between the shadow and the soul.
I love you as the plant that doesn't bloom and carries
hidden within itself the light of those flowers,
and thanks to your love, darkly in my body
lives the dense fragrance that rises from the earth.
I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where,
I love you simply, without problems or pride:
I love you in this way because I don't know any other way of loving
but this, in which there is no I or you,
so intimate that your hand upon my chest is my hand,
so intimate that when I fall asleep it is your eyes that close.


Oh this one makes me think of Master so much~I love him this way. It is so beautiful. Neruda is genius at getting to the soul of humanity and raw love.




Vendaval -> RE: What's your favorite poem? (3/30/2009 8:09:25 PM)

 
Selections from Loose Woman (1994) Vintage Books, Sandra Cisneros

"Las Girlfriends"

Tip the barmaid in tight jeans.
She's my friend.
Been to hell and back and gain.
I've been there too.

Girlfriend, I believe in Gandhi.
But some nights nothing says it
quite precise like a Lone Star
cracked on someone's head.

Last week in this same bar,
kicked a cowboy in the butt
who made a grab for Terry's ass.
How do I explain, it was all
of Texas I was kicking,
and all our asses on the line.

At Tacoland, Cat flamencoing crazy
circles round the pool
player with the furry tongue.
A warparth of sorts for every
wrong ever wronged us.

And Terry here has her own history.
A bar down the stree she can't
go in, and one downtown. Me
a French cafe' in Austin
where they don't say--entrez-vous.

Little Rose of San Antone
is the queen bee of kick-nalga.
When you go out with her,
don't wear your good clothes.

But the best story is la Barbara
who runs for the biggest kitchen knife
in the house every bad-ass domestic quarrel.
Points it towards her own heart
like some Aztec priestess gone loca.
ME MATO!

I tell you, nights like these,
something bubbles from
the tips of our pointy boots
to the top of our coyote yowl.

Y'all wicked mean, a voice at the bar
claims. Naw, not mean. Shit!
Been to hell and back again.
Girl, me too.

http://www-personal.umich.edu/~vreyna/cis3.html

 




MadAxeman -> RE: What's your favorite poem? (3/30/2009 8:23:41 PM)

Nobody should need an introduction to this

Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimm'd;
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
By chance or nature's changing course untrimm'd;
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow'st;
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou grow'st:
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.




KneelforAnne -> RE: What's your favorite poem? (3/30/2009 9:45:09 PM)

This is such a good thread! 
I had more to add
(Song lyrics, but still....)
 
[image]http://www.collarchat.com/micons/m16.gif[/image]
 
When the rain is blowing in your face
And the whole world is on your case
I would offer you a warm embrace
To make you feel my love

When the evening shadows and the stars appear
And there is no one to dry your tears
I could hold you for a million years
To make you feel my love

I know you haven't made your mind up yet
But I would never do you wrong
I've known it from the moment that we met
There's no doubt in my mind where you belong

I'd go hungry, I'd go black and blue
I'd go crawling down the avenue
There ain't nothing that I wouldn't do
To make you feel my love

The storms are raging on the rollin' sea
Down the highway of regret
The winds of change are blowing wild and free
But you ain't seen nothing like me yet

There ain't nothing that I wouldn't do
Go to the ends of the earth for you
Make you happy, make your dreams come true
To make you feel my love
-Bob Dylan
 
~~**~~
 
Walk down that lonesome road all by yourself
Don’t turn your head back over your shoulder
And only stop to rest yourself when the silver moon
Is shining high above the trees

If I had stopped to listen once or twice
If I had closed my mouth and opened my eyes
If I had cooled my head and warmed my heart
Id not be on this road tonight

Carry on

Never run feeling sorry for yourself
It doesn’t save you from your troubled mind

Walk down that lonesome road all by yourself
Don’t turn your head back over your shoulder
And only stop to rest yourself when the silver moon
Is shining high above the trees
-James Taylor




girlygurl -> RE: What's your favorite poem? (3/31/2009 8:21:39 PM)

Well, I don't know if this is my favorite. I just read it from my text book... Oh yes, it made me cry, but then again I'm feeling weepy so what's new. [:(]

"Will You Be My Friend?" by James Kavanaugh

Will you be my friend?
There are so many reasons why you never should:
I'm sometimes sullen, often shy, acutely sensitive,
My fear erupts as anger, I find it hard to give,
I talk about myself when I'm afraid
And often spend a day without anything to say.
But I will make you laugh
And love you quite a bit
And hold you when you're sad.
I cry a little almost everyday
Because I'm more caring than the strangers ever know,
And, if at times, I show my tender side
(The soft and warmer part I hide)
I wonder,
Will you be my friend?
A friend
Who far beyond the feebleness of any vow or tie
Will touch the secret place where I am really I,
To know the pain of lips that plead and eyes that weep,
Who will not run away when you find me in the street
Alone and lying mangled by my quota of defeats
But will stop and stay - to tell me of another day
When I was beautiful.

Will you be my friend?
There are so many reasons why you never should:
Often I'm too serious, seldom predictably the same,
Sometimes cold and distant, probably I'll always change.
I bluster and brag, seek attention like a child,
I brood and out, my anger can be wild,
But I will make you laugh
And love you quite a bit
And be near you when you're afraid.
I shake a little almost everyday
Because I'm more frightened than the strangers ever know
And if at times I show my trembling side
(The anxious, fearful part I hide)
I wonder,
Will you be my friend?
A friend
Who, when I fear your closeness, feels me push away and
Stubbornly will stay to share what's left on such a day,
Who, when no one knows my name or calls me
On the phone
When there's no concern for me - what I have
Or haven't done -
And those I've helped and counted on have,
Oh so deftly, run,
Who, when there's nothing left but me,
Stripped of charm and subtlety,
Will nonetheless remain.

Will you be my friend?
For no reason that I know
Except I want you so.





lighthearted -> RE: What's your favorite poem? (3/31/2009 9:27:04 PM)

a perennial favorite of mine:

somewhere i have never travelled

somewhere i have never travelled, gladly beyond
any experience,your eyes have their silence:
in your most frail gesture are things which enclose me,
or which i cannot touch because they are too near

your slightest look easily will unclose me
though i have closed myself as fingers,
you open always petal by petal myself as Spring opens
(touching skilfully,mysteriously)her first rose

or if your wish be to close me,i and
my life will shut very beautifully,suddenly,
as when the heart of this flower imagines
the snow carefully everywhere descending;

nothing which we are to perceive in this world equals
the power of your intense fragility:whose texture
compels me with the color of its countries,
rendering death and forever with each breathing

(i do not know what it is about you that closes
and opens;only something in me understands
the voice of your eyes is deeper than all roses)
nobody,not even the rain,has such small hands

ee cummings





stella41b -> RE: What's your favorite poem? (4/1/2009 4:51:51 AM)

Love

You said the words 'I love you'
But I can see how things have changed
I said the words 'I love you'
For my feelings remain the same
You said you'd love me forever
But forever just isn't long enough
I said I'd love you always
And meant it to mean forever
But I now cannot explain
What that really means
Because your understanding of forever
Isn't what it seems
And my understanding of love
Yet more shattered dreams..

Stella




persephonee -> RE: What's your favorite poem? (4/1/2009 4:57:10 AM)

this girl adores Stella...[:)]




sheerslave -> RE: What's your favorite poem? (4/1/2009 7:38:14 AM)

Inside
of
this
flesh
of mine
my
soul cries
so loud it
screams
i hear
his voice
it whispers
my slave
it beckons
my
every move
To him 
i  submit
in a
natural sway
to find
my
peace
and order
within
I'll wear
his mark
with a
prideful
reminder
it is
to him
I must
kneel
as i
always will
craving
his touch
so i
won't hurt
so much
feeding
his need
to control
complacent
as i  
hand over 
my reins
to discover
the balance
of life
lay within
us both
for we are
Master
and
slave
as i
beg for
his collar

~slvgrl~2009




sunshinemiss -> RE: What's your favorite poem? (4/1/2009 8:32:58 AM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: Aynne88


Pablo Neruda


Sonnet XVII (100 Love Sonnets, 1960) 

I don't love you as if you were the salt-rose, topaz
or arrow of carnations that propagate fire:
I love you as certain dark things are loved,
secretly, between the shadow and the soul.
I love you as the plant that doesn't bloom and carries
hidden within itself the light of those flowers,
and thanks to your love, darkly in my body
lives the dense fragrance that rises from the earth.
I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where,
I love you simply, without problems or pride:
I love you in this way because I don't know any other way of loving
but this, in which there is no I or you,
so intimate that your hand upon my chest is my hand,
so intimate that when I fall asleep it is your eyes that close.


Oh this one makes me think of Master so much~I love him this way. It is so beautiful. Neruda is genius at getting to the soul of humanity and raw love.


Hey Aynne,
I too love Pablo Neruda.  I bought a book of his poems in Spanish as well. 

I was teaching Muslim students in Oregon last year and there was one guy - bedroom eyes, the dark skin, very sensual.  He read a poem by a Saudi poet.  I wish I could find it.  It was so beautiful, seeing this man from a closed society being so open and full of passion.  He had a little flirtation going with a Korean gal (another repressed society). I had never thought of Muslims as passionate like that, and the poem was about the sweetness of dates and the sweetness of love. 


One of the greatest gifts of humanity is translation.




sunshinemiss -> RE: What's your favorite poem? (4/1/2009 8:41:52 AM)





While trying to find the poem I was talking of I stumbled upon this.  It gave me goose bumps.

 




Go Not, Beloved and Cruel
  by: Al-Mu'tamid ibn Abbad (1040-1095)
    translated by Dulcie L. Smith


 






Go not, beloved and cruel; I have not strength
To say farewell to thee, thou canst not go!
Behold the fountain of my tears at length
Consumed away, and I have sorrowed so
that in the dry wells of these barren eyes
No more, no more thy treasured image lies.

 
Alas, what love is this that burns like fire?
Look thou, my body is a useless thing,
So worn it is, so wasted with
desire,
I am grown lean with love; the new days bring
Only new pains that sap the blood of me,
Because of thee, beloved, because of thee!

 
And I, whose sport was ever with the spear
To the glad music of the battle-cry,
Who scorned to wear the panoply of
Fear,
The trappings of the prudent--even I,
A conqueror always--I am vanquished now.
Mercy I cry! Yet merciless art thou.




shannie -> RE: What's your favorite poem? (4/1/2009 9:35:34 AM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: angelikaJ

One of my favorites:


What The Dog Perhaps Hears

If an inaudible whistle
blown between our lips
can send him home to us,
then silence is perhaps
the sound of spiders breathing
and roots mining the earth;
it may be asparagus heaving,
headfirst, into the light
and the long brown sound
of cracked cups, when it happens.
We would like to ask the dog
if there is a continuous whir
because the child in the house
keeps growing, if the snake
really stretches full length
without a click and the sun
breaks through clouds without
a decibel of effort,
whether in autumn, when the trees
dry up their wells, there isn't a shudder
too high for us to hear.

What is it like up there
above the shut-off level
of our simple ears?
For us there was no birth cry,
the newborn bird is suddenly here,
the egg broken, the nest alive,
and we heard nothing when the world changed.

Lisel Mueller




I love this....




shannie -> RE: What's your favorite poem? (4/1/2009 9:36:54 AM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: coupleowl

Annabel Lee

It was many and many a year ago,
In a kingdom by the sea
That a maiden there lived whom you may know
By the name of Annabel Lee--
And this maiden she lived with no other thought
Than to love and be loved by me.

I was a child and she was a child,
In this kingdom by the sea,
But we loved with a love that was more than love--
I and my Annabel Lee--
With a love that the winged seraphs of heaven
Coveted her and me.

And this was the reason that, long ago,
In this kingdom by the sea,
A wind blew out of a cloud, chilling
My beautiful Annabel Lee;
So that her highborn kinsmen came
And bore her away from me,
To shut her up in a sepulchre
In this kingdom by the sea.

The angels, not half so happy in heaven,
Went envying her and me--
Yes!--that was the reason (as all men know,
In this kingdom by the sea)
That the wind came out of the cloud by night,
Chilling and killing my Annabel Lee.

But our love it was stronger by far than the love
Of those who were older than we--
Of many far wiser than we--
And neither the angels in heaven above,
Nor the demons down under the sea,
Can ever dissever my soul from the soul
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee:

For the moon never beams, without bringing me dreams
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee:
And the stars never rise, but I feel the bright eyes
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee:
And so, all the night-tide, I lay down by the side
Of my darling--my darling--my life and my bride,
In the sepulchre there by the sea--
In her tomb by the sounding sea.



So pretty.  Nabokov embedded this poem in Lolita, I think...




MasterHypnotist -> RE: What's your favorite poem? (4/1/2009 9:50:02 AM)

now I love you and you love me
(and books are shutter
than books
can be)
and deep in the high that does nothing but fall
(with a shout
each
around we go all)
there's somebody calling who's we

we're anything brighter then even the sun
(we're everything greater
than books
might mean)
we're every anything more than believe
(with a spin
leap
alive we're alive)
we're wonderful one times one

ee cummings
one times one
 
Maybe it's because I first presented it (for an Oral Interpretation class) as a young married student, going back to college. Tears in the classroom (and me near tears). But hard, bottomline, Domly... I got an A! Really, that's all that matters, isn't it?
 
not
by a long
shot
 
mh




shannie -> RE: What's your favorite poem? (4/1/2009 4:40:58 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: MasterHypnotist
not
by a long
shot


smiles at MH....

The Windhover, by Gerald Manley Hopkins


I caught this morning morning’s minion, kingdom of daylight’s dauphin,
dapple-drawn Falcon, in his riding
    Of the rolling level underneath him steady air, and striding
High there, how he rung upon the rein of a wimpling wing
In his ecstasy! Then off, off forth on swing,
    As a skate’s heel sweeps smooth on a bow-bend; the hurl and gliding
    Rebuffed the big wind. My heart in hiding
Stirred for a bird--the achieve of, the mastery of the thing!


Brute beauty and valor and act; oh, air, pride, plume, here
    Buckle! And the fire that breaks from thee then, a billion
Times told lovelier, more dangerous, O my chevalier!
  

No wonder of it; sheer plod makes plow down sillion
Shine, and blue-bleak embers, ah my dear,
    Fall, gall themselves, and gash gold-vermillion.








Vendaval -> RE: What's your favorite poem? (4/1/2009 5:16:14 PM)

Another by Sandra Cisneros -

"Loose Woman"

They say I'm a beast.
And feast on it. When all along
I thought that's what a woman was.

They say I'm a bitch.
Or witch. I've claimed
the same and never winced.

They say I'm a macha, hell on wheels,
viva-la-vulva, fire and brimstone,
man-hating, devastating,
boogey-woman lesbian.
Not necessarily,
but I like the compliment.

The mob arrives with stones and sticks
to maim and lame and do me in.
All the same, when I open my mouth,
they wobble like gin.

Diamonds and pearls
tumble from my tongue.
Or toads and serpents.
Depending on the mood I'm in.

I like the itch I provoke.
The rustle of rumor
like crinoline.

I am the woman of myth and bullshit.
(True. I authored some of it.)
I built my house of ill repute.
Brick by brick. Labored,
loved and masoned it.

I live like so.
Heart as sail, ballast, rudder, bow.
Rowdy. Indulgent to excess.
My sin and success--
I think of me to gluttony.

By all accounts I am
a danger to society.
I'm Pancha Villa.

I break laws,
upset the natural order,
anguish the Pope and make fathers cry.
I am beyond the jaw of law.
I'm la desperada, most-wanted public enemy.
My happy picture grinning from the wall.

I strike terror among the men.
I can't be bothered what they think.
Que se vayan a la ching chang chong!
For this, the cross, the Calvary.
In other words, I'm anarchy.

I'm an aim-well,
shoot-sharp,
sharp-tongued,
sharp-thinking,
fast-speaking,
foot-loose,
loose-tongued,
let-loose,
woman-on-the-loose
loose woman.
Beware, honey.

I'm Bitch. Beast. Macha.
W'chale!
Ping! Ping! Ping!
I break things.

http://www-personal.umich.edu/~vreyna/cis3.html




kidwithknife -> RE: What's your favorite poem? (4/1/2009 5:21:23 PM)

Hospital Art by John Hegley

In the afternoons, between toileting
the doubly incontinent patients
and given them their tea
there were a couple of hours
in which the staff and patients usually sat around staring into space.
I might have been the same after a few years in the place
but being an enthusiastic newcomer
and a student on vacation
I said hey, let's get everyone doing art!
So I got the materials we needed,
sat everyone around tables and proceeded.
They were not the most capable of artists
but together we made some things that we put up on the wall together.
really brightened up the ward.
The next day I was not working
and on my return I found the walls to be bare.
The staff nurse had torn down the pictures;
he told me they were ugly
and they underlined the inabilities of the patients.
I said that the pictures had gone
because they were a reminder
of the fact that he spent the afternoons staring into space
rather than trying to do something creative
with those in his care.
I said he was a disgrace.
I said I hope you're very proud,
but I never said it aloud.




DemonKia -> RE: What's your favorite poem? (4/4/2009 10:09:32 PM)

Pretty much anything in the Tao, or written by Pablo Neruda or Kahlil Gibran will stoke my poet's fire; I also like some of e. e. cummings' works, especially that one about 'your body & mine', I'll try to find it later . . . . .

But instead I'm going to choose to interpret this as a 'which of my poems is my favorite' . . . . lol

I'm really happy with this one:

admission of a poet

when i was 15
in that militantly idealistic space
that forms some core of who i am

i made all these decisions
i’m always making decisions
that this or that is this or that

& i decided that poetry was dead
& certainly no way to make money
which is really what’s important right

so it’s really funny 27 years later
when i find such a pleasurable voice
in my erratic prose poems

everyone keeps assuring me
poetry’s still dead but man
who fuck cares




SteelofUtah -> RE: What's your favorite poem? (4/4/2009 10:35:50 PM)

One of my own that I am rather fond of:

Of Things I've Done:

I look with eyes of honesty
in this world of deciet and lies
for a girl who waits in sinserity f
or another pair of honest eyes.
I am not perfect I must confess
my past is filled with tears
as a Master I have made mistakes
and earned scars throughout the years
a slave is a responsibility
in my youth I took too soon
I took their gift and returned not
and lay wake in all but ruin
I learned my trade on broken things
and the beliefs I've torn apart
for the slave she trusted all I was
her reward a broken heart
I am not perfect of this I've said
Today I try my best
I lead my slave the best I can
and lay my past to rest
I don't forget the person I was
all to quick to take
promises made today I keep
and ammends today I make
I've been entrusted a human life
she gave herself to me
a Man who's made a million wrongs
I wonder if she'll see
I never question her dilligence
as once I did my own
she's the sweetest any man could want
and the only love I've ever known

Steel ~~ 2006 ~Copyrighted~





Another one I am fond of which is my own:

What Makes This Child Cry:

What makes this child cry?
I Scream with passion,
as I watch the willow burn.
It's weaping seems to solidify
That I am lost in arrogance
I am the standing Sentry,
who let the child pass.
I am the forgotten lyric,
that makes the song feel sad.
I am the broken heart,
you thought you left behind

What makes this child cry?
It resonates in my mind,
hitting memories best left behind.
For the first time I feel,
and I hate what I feel.
And I feel what I hate.
For what I hate is me.
For what I hate is Real,
For what I hate, hates me.

What makes this child cry?
The misery we transmit,
Like disease.
Through words and Spit,
And Angst.
The sex only seems to dry me in blood.
Like a whore I stand stripped of dignity,
Like a whore I do only what I know,
Like a whore I despise every dollar,
And know I need more.

What makes this child cry?
It's the way the girl looks at me.
It makes me want to lie,
Tell her all these falacies,
to make her love me more.
Tell her I'm no killer,
and put the blade away.
Tell her I'm a sinner,
and have her wash the sin away.

What makes this child cry?
The mirror Image of myself,
as he looks deep.
Seeing the reality of what I have become.
I am the child crying,
I am the burning willow,
I am the very thing I hate.

Steel 2007 ~copyrighted~




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