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back to basics: a character is what they look like, how they think, what they say, what they do. Most often, the best way to work these details into a story is to simply introduce them in the midst of some activity which they find challenging. I seem to recall a story by Pat Califia, which described a very small Domme having to stand on a box to kiss her girlfriend who was tied to a St. Andrews cross, and having to push her big round glasses out of the way to do it. You immediately got a sense that the woman was small physically, but that the effect she was having on her sub made her a giant.

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ORIGINAL: MarsBonfire

The observer... back to basics: a character is what they look like, how they think, what they say, what they do. Most often, the best way to work these details into a story is to simply introduce them in the midst of some activity which they find challenging. I seem to recall a story by Pat Califia, which described a very small Domme having to stand on a box to kiss her girlfriend who was tied to a St. Andrews cross, and having to push her big round glasses out of the way to do it. You immediately got a sense that the woman was small physically, but that the effect she was having on her sub made her a giant.