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How's this one ? - 2/22/2006 1:12:54 PM   
maybemaybenot


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Status: offline 		I have been around CM for a while now and when I first joined I wrote a generic, non discript profile. I decided to re write it and give a litle more of *me* in a revised one.

Soooooooo.... as I have seen others do, I am asking for input, critique, opinions or anything else you might fancy. Thanx in advance.

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RE: How's this one ? - 2/22/2006 1:18:05 PM   
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Status: offline 		I think it's wonderful

Of course, the fact that you are a Patriot fan is a, ummm...black mark against you...but, on the other hand...Brady is part of the team...sooooooooooooo

Seriously though, it's very nicely written.

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RE: How's this one ? - 2/22/2006 1:29:26 PM   
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Status: offline 		Very good. A couple of things I noticed. Skiing is one word, nueter should be neuter. Nothing major.

The only thing that would set that off nicely would be a nice picture. A becoming face shot I think.

But yeah, looks good. Reads very well.

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RE: How's this one ? - 2/22/2006 1:31:37 PM   
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quote:

Soooooooo.... as I have seen others do, I am asking for input, critique, opinions or anything else you might fancy.


Get ready for a flood of emails. :) You might want to double check for spelling errors if that's your thing though.

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RE: How's this one ? - 2/22/2006 1:40:58 PM   
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RE: How's this one ? - 2/22/2006 1:51:05 PM   
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Status: offline 		I enjoyed it and it sounds like you are very together, thoughtful and adventurous, all of which are wonderful traits. I am sure you'll make many friends here. Women football freaks are highly sought after, BTW. You are a rare breed!
Now, about this antislavery thing.....think you can put a lid on it...atleast while chatting here?

Goodluck, Kevin




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RE: How's this one ? - 2/22/2006 3:23:00 PM   
maybemaybenot


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Bita and SirKenin:

I appreciate the proof read. I don't mind a typo or two in posts, but profiles are different, IMO. I didn't consider e mail flooding, I was thinking more that since I do post, people should have some idea of who I am.

IrishMist:

C'mon now... don't be hating on the Pats !!
Are you a Colts fan ? Lemme know cuz I have a little get together at my house when the Colts play up here and Colts friends fly in from Indy for the game and my night before party You would be more than welcome to join us. ohhhh, did I tell you Tom always drops by for cocktails and parlor games?

Mistress Hathor:

GRAZIE !!!

fastlane:

mums the word on the anti slavery thingy. But be afraid, be very afraid.

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RE: How's this one ? - 2/22/2006 3:30:19 PM   
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Status: offline 		Excelent readling lass it gave me a good feel for you as a person...

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RE: How's this one ? - 2/22/2006 4:10:09 PM   
IrishMist


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IrishMist:

C'mon now... don't be hating on the Pats !!
Are you a Colts fan ? Lemme know cuz I have a little get together at my house when the Colts play up here and Colts friends fly in from Indy for the game and my night before party You would be more than welcome to join us. ohhhh, did I tell you Tom always drops by for cocktails and parlor games?


Actually

/backs away a bit

I am a Bronco's fan



But Brady sure does kick ass

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RE: How's this one ? - 2/22/2006 5:56:45 PM   
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Actually

/backs away a bit

I am a Bronco's fan



But Brady sure does kick ass

Irish Mist


~pokes IM with a stick; FOOTBALL??? you brat!~

~o, mbmn, it's gorgeous, i just loved it....so well-written...bad girl on the football thing~

LOL; such great women you two are.

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RE: How's this one ? - 2/22/2006 6:18:50 PM   
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FOOTBALL RULES, right along with hockey, basketball, rodeo, drag racing, motorcross, and the xgames

/nods

in that order

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RE: How's this one ? - 2/22/2006 6:25:50 PM   
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Status: offline 		LOL, Irishmist !! All is cool, I happen to like the Broncos too. John Elway is still my second fave QB. I was pulling for them against the Steelers < runs and hides from katy >
John Elway is still my second fave QB. I want to find that new line of furniture he has and check it out. And Jake Plummer makes my estrogen soar !!!

IronBear : Thank You. That is what I was going for. And you know I hold your opinion with great respect.

Candy : When you finally meet your one, I am gonna send him my # 12 jersey, lots of rope and a ball gag.
Wellah !! Candy bound and gagged in front of the Big screen all day watching big burly men in tight pants do their thing. One womens torture is another womans joy !!

mbmbn

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RE: How's this one ? - 2/22/2006 6:28:04 PM   
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Candy : When you finally meet your one, I am gonna send him my # 12 jersey, lots of rope and a ball gag.
Wellah !! Candy bound and gagged in front of the Big screen all day watching big burly men in tight pants do their thing. One womens torture is another womans joy !!


LOL she lives close enough to me that I can run over there and umm....take lots of pictures too....nothing like a little ummm, leverage against her poking me lately

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RE: How's this one ? - 2/22/2006 8:02:19 PM   
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Candy : When you finally meet your one, I am gonna send him my # 12 jersey, lots of rope and a ball gag.
Wellah !! Candy bound and gagged in front of the Big screen all day watching big burly men in tight pants do their thing. One womens torture is another womans joy !!

LOL she lives close enough to me that I can run over there and umm....take lots of pictures too....nothing like a little ummm, leverage against her poking me lately

IrishMiat


We live close? Let's go shoe shopping. candystripper

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RE: How's this one ? - 2/23/2006 3:56:03 AM   
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