Profile critique?

Profile critique? (Full Version)

All Forums >> [Casual Banter] >> Off the Grid

Message

cornflakegirl -> Profile critique? (8/11/2009 2:29:23 PM)
Maybe this is the wrong forum, but I was hoping to get some feedback on my profile. I am really looking for a full relationship, not just a quick online chat and wank, so I'd like to know if what I have written gets that across well. Thanks!

Apocalypso -> RE: Profile critique? (8/11/2009 2:45:21 PM)
Decent profile. It strikes me as targetted to attracting 'your type' rather than 'anybody'. And also towards looking very much at compatibility outside of BDSM as well as within in. If those are your aims, your profile does the job.

cornflakegirl -> RE: Profile critique? (8/11/2009 2:48:07 PM)
Awesome, thanks! That's really what I want - a great relationship with great BDSM and great sex. :)

LillyoftheVally -> RE: Profile critique? (8/11/2009 2:49:56 PM)
quote: ORIGINAL: cornflakegirl Awesome, thanks! That's really what I want - a great relationship with great BDSM and great sex. :) Oh love, who doesn't. Good luck. [:D]

cornflakegirl -> RE: Profile critique? (8/11/2009 2:53:24 PM)
quote: ORIGINAL: LillyoftheVally quote: ORIGINAL: cornflakegirl Awesome, thanks! That's really what I want - a great relationship with great BDSM and great sex. :) Oh love, who doesn't. Good luck. [:D] LOL! Apparently the vast majority of men who message me. Lack of respect for reasonable boundaries (No I will not let you come pick me and my kid up at my house when I have never met you!) and immediate wank talk. S'ok, the right one will come along eventually. :)

daintydimples -> RE: Profile critique? (8/11/2009 2:58:13 PM)
I enjoyed your profile, you told who you are, and gave a hint of what you could offer. And yeah.....90% of the many messages I get are from wankers or people incapable of initiating a (real) conversation with a female. May I assume from your nick you're a Tori fan? dd

leadership527 -> RE: Profile critique? (8/11/2009 2:59:39 PM)
I like it. It seems like a description of a real, complete human being (as opposed to a character in some erotic fiction story). The only thing I didn't get out of your profile is what, exactly, you mean by submissive. Are we talking some kinky slap & tickle or does it go outside the bedroom? I like your angle of not going into details on all the kink stuff, but at least at the super high level, it'd be nice to know where you're head's at.

cornflakegirl -> RE: Profile critique? (8/11/2009 3:02:14 PM)
quote: ORIGINAL: daintydimples I enjoyed your profile, you told who you are, and gave a hint of what you could offer. And yeah.....90% of the many messages I get are from wankers or people incapable of initiating a (real) conversation with a female. May I assume from your nick you're a Tori fan? dd Yes! I really love Tori Amos. :)

cornflakegirl -> RE: Profile critique? (8/11/2009 3:03:32 PM)
quote: ORIGINAL: leadership527 I like it. It seems like a description of a real, complete human being (as opposed to a character in some erotic fiction story). The only thing I didn't get out of your profile is what, exactly, you mean by submissive. Are we talking some kinky slap & tickle or does it go outside the bedroom? I like your angle of not going into details on all the kink stuff, but at least at the super high level, it'd be nice to know where you're head's at. Thank you! I will put some thought into that and update it. :)

daintydimples -> RE: Profile critique? (8/11/2009 3:05:59 PM)
Me too, I love Tori.

LadyPact -> RE: Profile critique? (8/11/2009 3:07:20 PM)
I agree with Jeff. It's not bad, but it could use a little touching up.

leadership527 -> RE: Profile critique? (8/11/2009 3:09:29 PM)
Sadly though, even though I'm flattered you agree wtih me, I'm still not bottoming to you. I'm a wimp and you, my lady, have a reputation laughs.

cornflakegirl -> RE: Profile critique? (8/11/2009 3:27:00 PM)
Wow, it's kind of incredibly hard to write boldly about what I like and want. As if all the people reading here will think I am such a freak. Ha! Thanks for the advice. :)

VanIsleKnight -> RE: Profile critique? (8/11/2009 3:29:13 PM)
You sound like a total sweetheart cornflakegirl! I think that if I were older and lived anywhere -remotely- close to you I would definitely ask you out. :) Surprising (or not, heh) though that you still get messaged by guys looking for one-nights or the like. I don't necessarily want to start another thread with the same topic as I think that's a bit repetitive, so (at the risk of hijacking) I am hoping that I my profile can be critiqued as well? I don't feel I'm necessarily good at the whole profiling myself thing at all. Nor am I that sure if the photos I have up should be accompanied by one of my bare back or something.

hizgeorgiapeach -> RE: Profile critique? (8/11/2009 4:10:52 PM)
It doesn't come as a surprise to me at all that you get messages from the morons, despite how clear you make it what you're looking for. I make it Exceptionally clear in my profile that I'm utterly, completely, totally, 100% uninterested in a relationship of any sort - that I am here strictly and solely for these boards - and I still daily get at least a couple of emails from various male submissives begging to serve me. (Um.. yeah... 'bout that... I'm not a dominant, I don't present myself as a dominant, my profile says "switch" at the top even...... so why is it that I still get such messages?)

cornflakegirl -> RE: Profile critique? (8/11/2009 5:02:48 PM)
quote: ORIGINAL: VanIsleKnight You sound like a total sweetheart cornflakegirl! I think that if I were older and lived anywhere -remotely- close to you I would definitely ask you out. :) Surprising (or not, heh) though that you still get messaged by guys looking for one-nights or the like. I don't necessarily want to start another thread with the same topic as I think that's a bit repetitive, so (at the risk of hijacking) I am hoping that I my profile can be critiqued as well? I don't feel I'm necessarily good at the whole profiling myself thing at all. Nor am I that sure if the photos I have up should be accompanied by one of my bare back or something. Thank you VIK! Your profile looks great to me. Remove the miles, catch you on a Dom day, maybe it would work out! ;) I like your blogs a lot. I think that adds a lot of dimension to you as a person. Also your second pic is super cute. :D

cornflakegirl -> RE: Profile critique? (8/11/2009 5:04:09 PM)
quote: ORIGINAL: hizgeorgiapeach It doesn't come as a surprise to me at all that you get messages from the morons, despite how clear you make it what you're looking for. I make it Exceptionally clear in my profile that I'm utterly, completely, totally, 100% uninterested in a relationship of any sort - that I am here strictly and solely for these boards - and I still daily get at least a couple of emails from various male submissives begging to serve me. (Um.. yeah... 'bout that... I'm not a dominant, I don't present myself as a dominant, my profile says "switch" at the top even...... so why is it that I still get such messages?) Seriously, I guess it's just a lack of reading. And people get so mad when you don't email them back, when it's perfectly clear they didn't really read your profile in the first place! Silliness.

DarkSteven -> RE: Profile critique? (8/11/2009 5:08:21 PM)
quote: ORIGINAL: cornflakegirl Wow, it's kind of incredibly hard to write boldly about what I like and want. As if all the people reading here will think I am such a freak. I should sure as hell HOPE so!

VanIsleKnight -> RE: Profile critique? (8/11/2009 5:09:21 PM)
Thanks, I wasn't entirely sure if I should bother blogging at all. It felt a little Live-Journaly to me, but I figured it'd help someone reading my profile get a better sense of what I'm like.

cornflakegirl -> RE: Profile critique? (8/11/2009 5:11:06 PM)
quote: ORIGINAL: DarkSteven quote: ORIGINAL: cornflakegirl Wow, it's kind of incredibly hard to write boldly about what I like and want. As if all the people reading here will think I am such a freak. I should sure as hell HOPE so! You got a real live giggle out of me. Thank you. ;)

Page: [1] 2 next > >>

Collarchat.com © 2025

Terms of Service

2.734375E-02