GotSteel -> RE: Male Dom in SoCal New to the life. (8/20/2009 8:23:39 PM)
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ORIGINAL: MrLee101 i am here trying to better my Dom skills. I'd advise you to start by improving your writing. In this format much of the impression that you're going to make will depend on your prose, so you probably don't want it to be full of errors. I'd suggest that you capitalize I, capitalize the first letter of a sentence and never use "u r". Hopefully you get the idea. I also find capitalizing dom and not sub to be cheesy, but that could just be me as plenty of other people do it.
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