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Kooth -> Vessel of Abandon (8/30/2004 4:03:20 PM)

The scene is the emergency room of a local hospital:

You lie on a gurney in an examination room, barely covered in a gown, and are tied down with lined nylon straps at wrists, ankles, and abdomen. You are moaning, with your eyes closed, tossing and turning and shaking your head in slow waves...occasionally your pelvis rises at a tilt, as if you are trying to impale yourself on something.

Doctor - What do we have here, Nurse?
Nurse - A young, beautiful woman who's in a state of extreme submission and arousal, she's been in a training program including compulsory masturbation and orgasm control with denial, and is right now suffering from withdrawal due to a suspension of all email contact with her Dom.
Doctor - Vital signs?
Nurse - Her pulse is strong and fast though somewhat erratic, BP slightly elevated, and has a temp. of 102 degrees. Pupils largely dilated, skin flushed...and Doctor?
Doctor - Yes Nurse?
Nurse - Doctor, her nipples are very engorged, and she's very, very wet between her legs. She's already soaked two sheets.
Doctor - Show me.
The nurse lifts the front of your gown, and the Doctor leans forward, slender beams of light from his examiner's eyewear reflecting off of the glistening, smooth surface of your genitals.
Doctor - Her labia and clitoris are also swollen, Nurse.
Nurse - Yes, doctor. And that ring through her hood - it, it seems to be...twitching!
Doctor - It is, Nurse.

The doctor takes off his glove, and with a glance at the Nurse, extends his index finger and runs it down the outside and back up between your labia. You moan. The moisture seeping from your vagina easily lubricates the doctor's finger, as he slides it slowly back and forth. Suddenly, he seems to come to a decision. He brings the finger up, to his mouth, and peering over his spectacles at the nurse, sucks it dry. Then he pulls your gown down over your breasts in an abrupt movement, and taking one large nipple between two fingers, begins to roll and lightly pinch it, occasionally flicking the ring there like one might dismiss a piece of lint from a sleeve. You gasp and twist. He rests his other hand on your pubic bone, seeming to settle it there like he's prepared for a long arduous treatment, while his finger resumes its stroking, this time concentrating on your clitoris and the immediate area around it. You begins humping against his hand in staccato movements.

Doctor - Nurse, I want you to start an IV of email, with 12 Kb of rules and 20 Kb of instructions. Then bring me a mouth bit and the anal probe. The large one.
Nurse - Yes, Doctor, right away. [As she turns away] I wonder who could have done such a thing to her, she seems so sweet...
Doctor - I did, Nurse. And yes, she is very sweet ... and submissive. She loves it.

The doctor looks down on his patient with a gentle gaze, and licks his lips. He continues his ministrations to your firm, ripe body, but does not appear to be in any hurry to ease your distress. You are moaning almost constantly now, plaintively, it seems. The nurse busies herself at the cabinets at the side of the room.

Doctor - (Speaking to himself, or perhaps, to you, if you can even hear him in the daze washing through you) And I adore her.

Tune in next week for the continuing story of our favorite submissive, and all of her predicaments and punishments, in "Vessel of Abandon".




theroebabe -> RE: Vessel of Abandon (8/30/2004 4:19:04 PM)

ok this is not fair more please!!!!!!




MistressDREAD -> RE: Vessel of Abandon (9/1/2004 11:32:34 AM)

This was great Kooth keep up the story line.................




SentForu -> RE: Vessel of Abandon (9/1/2004 12:47:09 PM)

*stamps feet*, come on Kooth. Don't leave us in suspense. Very erotic, BTW....excellent.

Myra




Kooth -> RE: Vessel of Abandon (9/1/2004 8:13:26 PM)

Thank you very much for your kind praise, I really appreciate it. I am editing and will be posting more parts, when not exploring the rest of this fine community.




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