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obedientoldersub -> The Ceremony (12/14/2009 11:19:55 AM)

The Ceremony


Esther the Matriarch, was Amanda's mother. She stood next to the fireplace, wearing a silk, blue print top and a light tan skirt. To her left, kneeling was Amanda's father. He was naked with his hands folded in front of him. Draped around both elbows was a white ribbon that was wrapped loosely once around his wrists. To his left and in front of him, stood Grace, Amanda's sister. Slight behind her and to her left Amanda's brother-in law is kneeling. He is also naked and has a ribbon wrapped around his arms and wrists.

"Approach." She said.

Amanda slowly walked from the doorway with Edward following. Amanda is dressed in a white cotton top and long skirt with white sandals. Edward is dressed in a white shirt and nave slacks with black loafers. Amanda stepped to the right, and Edward continued until he stood in front of Esther.

"Edward, we are about to engage in a solemn ceremony. After it is over, there can be no going back. So, at this time, you are given a chance to not continue. I will tell you that, at this point, approximately half the men in your position decide they do not wish to continue. So, what is your wish?"

"Ms. Esther, I expect this will be my last decision, and I wish to continue with this ceremony with all my heart, Ma'am."

"Very well." Esther tured to Amanda. "Amanda, basically the same question for you. We are about to engage in a solemn ceremony. After it is over, there can be no going back. I will tell you that, at this point, no woman has ever decided not to continue. So, what is you wish?"

"I wish to continue."

"Very good." Esther turned back to Edward. "Edward, have you been instructed as to the nature and the meaning of the ceremony we are about to engage in?"

"Yes, Ms. Esther. Ms. Amanda's father and brother in law have helped me, Ma'am."

"Very good. Begin."

Edward bent down and took his left shoe off. Taking his soft off, he folds it and places it in the shoe. He does the same for the right shoe and sock. He places both shoes and socks on the floor in front of him. He unbuttons his shirt and takes that off. He folds it and places it on top of his shoes. He unbuttons and unzips his pants and takes them off. He folds them and places them on top of his shirt. He then takes his briefs off and folds them, and places them on top of the pile. He is now totally naked. He bends down and picks up the pile of clothes. He hands the pile of clothes to Amanda's father.

Turning to Esther he says, "Ms. Esther, may I be allowed to speak?"

"Yes, please do."

"Thank you, Ma'am. When I got up this morning, I got dressed. I wore the shirt and pants and shoes I decided to wear. I have removed them as a symbolic gesture to indicate that I no longer desire to make such decisions. I am requesting that, from this point on, Ms. Amanda will make all decisions for me. It is my desire that from now on, she control me completely and entirely, Ma'am. Thank you for letting me speak."


"Very well. Amanda, you have heard what he said. Would you like to respond?"

"Yes, I would. I accept the responsibility and gladly assume control of him."

"Very good." Turning to Edward she says, "You were given the name Edward at your birth because at that time your mother had control over such things. Ms. Amanda now has control. You are no longer Edward. Ms. Amanda can give you whatever name she wants to."

Turning to Amanda she says, "Do you wish to give him a name, Amanda."

"No, not really. He will know when I am addressing him. Maybe at some point, he will deserve a name. But, for the time being, He does not need one."

"To close the ceremony, Amanda will give her first order."

"When I got dressed this morning, I chose not to polish the toenail of the small toe of my right foot. I now want it polished."

She hands her new property a small bottle of nail polish that she had in her hand. He gets down on his knees, shakes the bottle a few times and opens it. He gently uses the brush to apply a coat of deep red polish to her unpolished toe nail. He replaces the brush and gently blows to dry the nail. While still looking down at her feet, he holds the bottle up and she takes it.




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